aiight

10 - 20 lines
usual House rules
you spit first after check in man

this is ma check in

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aiight chkin in................................................ ........................................

this guy repin tha black knights..../
those clowns battle like dykes...they pillow-fight/
this guy from scotland...north of tha border/
his accent sounds like he`s got a speech disorder/
ima spit raw to fuck up ya whole clan/
this guy cudnt battle if he bit tha wu-tang/
my lyrical disease has one mission...to kill ya nervous system/
to deprive u of words...they call it malnutrition/
ma lyrics so quick outta ma head...cuming at u like a cypher/
bitch read carefully...theres sum big words u cant decypher/
im tha devil in this hell...n for you this is ya torture/
im a sadist mothafucka...so bite ma linez...i`ll torch-ya/(hell flames)
ima spit 16 linez of pure dope on this bitch/
so fuck it..go ahead n feed..coz i got u be-witched/
if i woz u, i wudnt waste yer best shit in this battle...u got notin to gain/
bitch... i`ll have u gone in 60 seconnds...jus like "memphis reigns"/


aight get 2 spitin..............

aiight man lets see what ya got ill spit straight after you man lets go dawg!

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fuck man i started to spit and ma comp crashed man give me 20mins to re type it

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haha chokin???????????????????????????????????????????? ?

why do da english think they grate/
its the country we all love to hate/
hers a long word for ya antidissastablishmantarinism/ (longest wrd in da dictionary)
say that with a mouth full of jism/
we all know what the english like it/
all of them so full of shit/
bet you chock when you get the mic/
just like in basketball ill hit ya with the sike/
this is your 3rd n final strike/
this mother fucker thinks hes bringin a storm/
but he aint even close to warm/
so now that the storm is over and done/
and just like william wallace ill make all ya all run/
only difference is im packin a gun/


aiight lets get votin

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too simple to win this battle, not bad for a keystyle tho... T storm got it with a better format, more complexity, better punches...

not a bad battle tho, ya both represented...
Pz
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V=T-storm

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this was a pretty weak battle i spose cause there wasnt many elements usesd in this battle

t-storm: u where first and u came aiight but pretty weak in my behalf i thought u could have came harder since u where first
yah wordplay and no mutlis ur punches was decent but also weak yah p[ersonals where abit harder then yah punches but still really weak

7.5/10 ur score....

Jae-Dog: u where very weak i thought u had the upper hand and time to take this battle but u wasted lines on a weak battle i thought u should have uses harde personals and punches

wordplay was ok p[unches weak personals weak no multis and u shoudl came heaps harder

6/10 ur score

VOTE- T-torm

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killing fake emcees like a Isolated~Orphan/
u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//

this guy repin tha black knights..../
those clowns battle like dykes...they pillow-fight/
Its an ok punch
this guy from scotland...north of tha border/
his accent sounds like he`s got a speech disorder/
HA HA good punch
ima spit raw to fuck up ya whole clan/
this guy cudnt battle if he bit tha wu-tang/
weak, very weak
my lyrical disease has one mission...to kill ya nervous system/
to deprive u of words...they call it malnutrition/
Aiight Aiight I'm feelin this
ma lyrics so quick outta ma head...cuming at u like a cypher/
bitch read carefully...theres sum big words u cant decypher/
This line was mediocre
im tha devil in this hell...n for you this is ya torture/
im a sadist mothafucka...so bite ma linez...i`ll torch-ya/(hell flames)
The devil thing is fuckin played
ima spit 16 linez of pure dope on this bitch/
so fuck it..go ahead n feed..coz i got u be-witched/
yead its aiight
if i woz u, i wudnt waste yer best shit in this battle...u got notin to gain/
bitch... i`ll have u gone in 60 seconnds...jus like "memphis reigns"/
Nice closing



why do da english think they grate/
its the country we all love to hate/
Eck, horrible opening
hers a long word for ya antidissastablishmantarinism/ (longest wrd in da dictionary)
say that with a mouth full of jism/
NO flow
we all know what the english like it/
all of them so full of shit/
Is this even considered a punch?
bet you chock when you get the mic/
just like in basketball ill hit ya with the sike/
this is your 3rd n final strike/
Eh this was pretty weak...
this mother fucker thinks hes bringin a storm/
but he aint even close to warm/
eh riiight
so now that the storm is over and done/
and just like william wallace ill make all ya all run/
only difference is im packin a gun/
Pretty good closer

aiight this is the point spread-
T-storm-7/10
Jay Dogg-4/10

Jay I've heard better stuff from you.

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I've Been Gone Longer Than You Been Writing

yeah man i know this is one of ma worst verses i was in a hurry n had 3 battles to spit in ayt the same time but fuck it man its all good lets get more votes

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this guy repin tha black knights..../
those clowns battle like dykes...they pillow-fight/

^^ interestin imagery there...coo
this guy from scotland...north of tha border/
his accent sounds like he`s got a speech disorder/

^^ blah

im tha devil in this hell...n for you this is ya torture/
im a sadist mothafucka...so bite ma linez...i`ll torch-ya/(hell flames)


^^ uy were setting this up well but it feel short of it's intended target

why do da english think they grate/
its the country we all love to hate/
hers a long word for ya antidissastablishmantarinism/ (longest wrd in da dictionary)

^^^ too simple and not feeling it..the long word bit was interesting...but otherwise, useless

^^ accidentally hit send...lol

not done

and just like william wallace ill make all ya all run/
only difference is im packin a gun/

^^ too simple


vote: Tstorm..more complexity


thought, neither of you had any real stand-out lines

lets all elevate

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First off T-storm was off the chain and i'll explain later

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