Cling rap, rope on ya neck, cut up ya chest, make u have bad flash backs like a Vietnam vet//
I’m here to get paid, so I’ll work u like a slave, get smoked by the blunt , just smell the purple haze//
I kill soloist like 50, make these bitches fatter then missy, got u looking as bad as Chris Rock on new jack city//
I’m the definition of hits, u need this smooth brown chick, instead u mother fuckers want to be as fake as Janet Jackson and lil Kim’s tits//
Living with me is hell, cause I speak cliental; I’m making as much hits as R.Kelly before he goes to jail//
U can’t do this, bitches I’m foolish, don’t step up to me, cause I’ll reject niggaz like Pepsi did ludacris//

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Adroit(ko)
Dalyricalvillain(5-4)
LyRiKaL19(Ko)
blackmon(ko)
Eclapt(DQ)

you got a good flow. i liked it.

thanks! Still uppin^^^

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Adroit(ko)
Dalyricalvillain(5-4)
LyRiKaL19(Ko)
blackmon(ko)
Eclapt(DQ)

Cling rap, rope on ya neck, cut up ya chest, make u have bad flash backs like a Vietnam vet//
I’m here to get paid, so I’ll work u like a slave, get smoked by the blunt , just smell the purple haze// Good flow and wordplay so far ma....

I kill soloist like 50, make these bitches fatter then missy, got u looking as bad as Chris Rock on new jack city//
I’m the definition of hits, u need this smooth brown chick, instead u mother fuckers want to be as fake as Janet Jackson and lil Kim’s tits// Haha last line was funny lmao...

Living with me is hell, cause I speak cliental; I’m making as much hits as R.Kelly before he goes to jail//
U can’t do this, bitches I’m foolish, don’t step up to me, cause I’ll reject niggaz like Pepsi did ludacris// Good ending

I liked this, ya kept a good flow and structure throughtout.....kept it steady......had some good wordplay in dere......

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Nice drop, 8/10.....keep up ma.....~1ne~

This was iight-- it had a good flow to it, a couple of the punchlines were weak but it definately shows skill and potential... stay up.

thanks, still uppin^^^

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Adroit(ko)
Dalyricalvillain(5-4)
LyRiKaL19(Ko)
blackmon(ko)
Eclapt(DQ)

cool man flo is good, but more intention needed

aye ma NICE...u've elevated so much..ur getting creative and shit keep it ma..nice drop 8/10 *ONE*

SB

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BATHING APE...(BAPE) FANATIC....

thanks, holla at me with a collab!!!!!!

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Adroit(ko)
Dalyricalvillain(5-4)
LyRiKaL19(Ko)
blackmon(ko)
Eclapt(DQ)

Weak..............u Barely Wrote A Few Lines N In Almost All Of Them U Had Some Rapper Reference............that,is For Beginners ...stay Away From That.........its Mad Played Out To Be Talkin Bout 50,r Kelly...etc.... Not To Mention Its Wack

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us waiver, waiver, us entry waiver, criminal record travel, denied entry us

hott shyt...no complaints that was some good shyt keep spittin ur shyt is worth more posts................

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ur got flow, and u had sum nice lines, i liked da janet and lil kim 1 and da pepsi 1 as well.... u'll do well if u keep it up and improve alil

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all bout da UK hip hop, dnt take us lightly
always ready 4 a challenge

good flow ma nice wordplay punchlines were a Lil weak...sounded like BABS but nice flo

thanks for the feed back, still uppin^^^^

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Adroit(ko)
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LyRiKaL19(Ko)
blackmon(ko)
Eclapt(DQ)

thought it was hot keep doin you girl.................

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