ok 10-12 lines
u spit first
no hate votes
no cheating

wtf is don/it sounds pretty gay/im gonna fuck u up/ or else get out my way/ i think ur name should be dawn/ cuz u sound like a faggish bitch/ u nothing but a stupid fucking itch/ if u win it must be a glitch/ cuz i can tell by ur name/ u must really suck/ so dont even try u stupid fuck/ hope u have some luck/ but everyone still knows u suck

don yur gonna merk this lil bitch wun....nuff said

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thats my boy jokah aight here its bout to be ova

someone shoulda warned you not to click post a reply...
little did this newb kno i am gona make him die...
why dont u title this battle "help its an emergency"...
cause your rhymes both suck and blow,together its called a mergery...
your rhymes so sad the only way its hot is if ur screens lit on fire...
afta this i want you to change your name to lyrically undesired...
you jus have to stop readin your shits jus has me tired...
if this is your career you should have yourself fired...
why the hell is tha name murda i wrote...
do us a favor wrap the mouse round ur neck,pull,n'choke...

aight lets get some votes

iight iight got me on round one
but heres round 2 bitch watch out for my gun
ur pussy ass prolly wouldnt wanta get cracked
o but wait looks like u just got bitch slapped
so shut the fuck up ur not even that good
ur sound pretty white but act from the hood
u nothing but bitch and u hide behind lies
ur prolly a fat little fuck who sits at home and eats fries
so yea keep on talking but back all ur shit up
or else quit the talkin u whiny little fuck

bitch this one only sposed to be one rhyme...
but i guess u aint learn the lesson ur first time...
rapein u this bad should be charged as a crime...
that shit u say couldnt be profited for dimes...
i am a fat italian kid who sits at home...
but your my bitch dog so shut ur mouth heres a bone...
join a wish upon a star foundation to donate you crome...
u deserve to live in a box so tell em fuck findin me a home...
nobody would want ur poor dirty ass with them...
god maybe this time ull shut ur mouth so i wont have to rape u again

now thats the end theresw only sposed to be one rhyme

that was ya best line don
murda u gotta elevate in errthing aight man i kno u a noob but still hom8ie u gotta come strong
DON elelvate ya punches homie..nice flow and structure..

open/none..but i guess DON took it
Multies/none
punches/ don
wordplay/don
flow/don
structure/don
finisher/none but don took it

ma vote don...wun....be ee.zz ya'll

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hahaha nigga u aint gotta spit again u MERKKKKKKKKKKKED him nuff said wun...

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yo jus so yall undastand im not hood im street but i didnt grow up wit blakcs or latinos i grew up wit italians and i neva act black like a wiger so dont try pullin that on me cause thats why i call mysefl don im an italian godfatha no ganglord

yo queens
u think u got shit
how bout we go
i spit first

yo jokah jus make a new battle n get him yo murda no offense but u gona get raped...again

Murda I wrote: okay lemme be honest your structure was seriously fucked
up, the punches didn't really hit hard at all, didn't flow well & vocab was
very basic

Don: structure was a lot better than Murda nuff said bout that....punches
hit a lot more harder than him in my opinion my favourite is

"your rhymes are so sad the only way its hot is if your screens lit on fire...
afta this i want you to change your name to lyrically undesired..."

flow was good & vocab was better than Murda

vote goes to: Don

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yo come on uppin for votes jus vote and ill return the favor

man don u kicked my ass haha o well i get better every time i go

so ima keep workin on it and eventually ill battle u again