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Old 05-28-04, 12:03 PM   #1
J-Burna
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J-burna..... 1st Drop

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just leave some feed if u read. lol

Verbally creepin into your minds like osmosis, u spazzed, actin like u got neurosis//
Makin y’all look again and double check my rhymes like “who~wrote~this?”//
Stunning y’all like electroly~sis, wat y’all want~with~this, lines delivered hot~an~crisp//
Punches connect just like I hit~with~fists, u mess~with~this, then we break~yo~hips//
Styles~I~flip, wicked multi’s demonstrated an~hit, shit, when u read this u better~sit//
Time~frames~split, if u aint feelin my rhymes, then obviously your mind~aint~fit//
Others lines~aint~shit, comin with the rawness that most y’all cant compete wit//
Doin big things, aint no discreet~clique, countin up our wins like mah~fuckin arithmetic//
My lines stay based upon intellect, it’s just like your high, coz I got the perfect~effect//
My words and your brains~connect, i keep my dialect~direct and flows correct//
Careful with the words I select, that’s right motherfuckers burna’s here, so u best respect//
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Old 05-28-04, 12:04 PM   #2
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it was iight but i wasnt feelin it to much u need to work on shortenin them lines and enhancin the word play keep elevatin iight.............
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Old 05-28-04, 12:25 PM   #3
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Nice multis... Flow was easy to follow... And be careful, most niggaz on this site bitch about structure and shit.
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Old 05-28-04, 09:24 PM   #4
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^^^^ true tay.. his flow was fire....FLAMES FLAMES FLAMES
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Old 05-29-04, 03:05 AM   #5
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up up up
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Old 06-01-04, 09:17 AM   #6
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Yo It Was Nice Keep It Up Kid
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Old 06-01-04, 12:21 PM   #7
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Old 06-01-04, 06:24 PM   #8
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Eh.. decent
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