it's time
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i spit first you have 7 mins to reply or your dq'd

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checkin...........

waiting...when is this herb gonna drop...

Blah not wasting my effort.

I'm twisted ?!?! wait this guy's good ? then explain his shit verse . .
Damn If HE's A VET . .Why again Is he Making a n00b spit FIRST?!?
fuck , i'm ripping this cat & i wont stop killing em - truth is beware.
yep you'll be [b[rookie[/b[ of the month . . . for about a million years
he'll put his lyrics in a bottle . . & lay it on the river yo . .
& even with the current wave's . . he still cant get his verse to flow.
Surrender yourself no resist me fool . . i can break you apart bitch .
& dont worry about losing respect . . cos you had NON to start with,
am i hitting you hard ... well not as hard as i hit wholes in ya bitch.
& really fuck HIS CREW , when even my mouse roll's with a click .

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woups anyway 6 mins ,

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his shit must be wack has to read it three times....7 mins start at 2:14 ct
my turn

there's supposed to be a dash in between in-sight
and if you dont get it..its too complicated for ya

In-Sight as in In reality

Deleon got this shit fo sho...
CHECK it...


You a soft bitch cryin that you gotta go first…I don’t care!!//
And this bitch couldnt "wipe shit" if he was the "charmin bear"//
FUNNY LINE
This guy cant be real.. a rappers one thing this singer aint..//
This is the Art of War, Insight came ready with Finger paint//
Another Funny Line
It'll be harsh when My witty slangs rough on this puke//
but your such a loser, even the dial tone hung up on you//
Rippin this bitch already after 3 bars
You had a vision of beating vets….but Im bombin ya//
Cuz his only Straight lines are on his Hospitals heart monitor //
Nice Again
Im through with the bullshit, No more playin cuz I merkeed this lame//
And sat his whole team down like Randy johnsons perfect game//
Nice closer....

Aight Deleon took this by far.. no need to break down Mez's spit, cause it was nothin compared to that..

Mez.. you were OKAY.. but nothin against a vet like Deleon... he showed how he was voted rookie of the month... better punches, flow, and more entertaining to look at...

Vote DELEON

DeLeon won this round overall better verse i loved the line about finger pain and shit

Break Down

MezMolois

Flow 5/10
Rhymez 6/10
Punches 4/10
Structure 5/10
20/40

DeLeon

Flow 7/10
Rhymez 8/10
Punches 9/10
Structure 7/10
31/40

V/Deleon

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

WHOA DELEON TOOK THIS BATTLE HANDS DOWN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well I read DeLeon's first bar & I was like yo Mez already got merked!!

You a soft bitch cryin that you gotta go first…I don’t care!!//
And this bitch couldnt "wipe shit" if he was the "charmin bear"//

^^^real nice opener I actually cracked a smile.....

another highlight was the heart monitor bar nice punch...

well as you can see ^ you..... DeLeon takes this easy with much
better punches, flow, vocab, wordplay you name it...

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I'm twisted ?!?! wait this guy's good ? then explain his shit verse . .
Damn If HE's A VET . .Why again Is he Making a n00b spit FIRST?!?
fuck , i'm ripping this cat & i wont stop killing em - truth is beware.
yep you'll be [b[rookie[/b] of the month . . . for about a million years

^^ NOOB spit 1st lines are played and corny.PERIOD. flow is ok...but this stop and go rhyming of yours can get annoying...and you either BIT that million years LINE or this is an ALIAS...so You best explain...cuz Im going to STROBE...

Surrender yourself no resist me fool . . i can break you apart bitch .
& dont worry about losing respect . . cos you had NON to start with,
am i hitting you hard ... well not as hard as i hit wholes in ya bitch.
& really fuck HIS CREW , when even my mouse roll's with a click .

^^^ this is clever wordplay...but as a punch, it doesn't do much damage to him...rather filler-ish


20/30

You a soft bitch cryin that you gotta go first…I don’t care!!//
And this bitch couldnt "wipe shit" if he was the "charmin bear"//
This guy cant be real.. a rappers one thing this singer aint..//
This is the Art of War, Insight came ready with Finger paint//


^^^ This is a good opener...and I think MEZ is SOUL SKRIPTZ cuz that Line about "being a rookie for a million years" looks familiar...Plus, he whined like a BITCH in our Battle about me making him post first when that wasn't even the case. So, in my opinion, this opener is enough to rip his whole fucking verse.


PERIOD.


Vote: DELEON...harder hitting punches.PERIOD.


Ps. White Powder...I beat Deleon 5-1...so, um...maybe I should be rookie of the month

hehehe


MEZ is SS yall

Im out

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alright thanx for tha votes

uppin for some more..........

uppin for some more votes......

aight battle.DeLeon better verse, lyrics,punches and structure. just cut the bullshit talk in the begining of your raps. if you gonna spit, spit stop talking.anyway elevate everything, the only reason this guy will probabaly loose is b/c he was wack, not enough good punches.

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