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06-09-04, 12:58 PM
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so i'm in the club right
and i'm looking thug like when this female step up like "i'm you future wife" man she came so unproper but blood i couldn't stop her she unzipped them pants, on everything, she quickly dropped them i'm like slow it down i'm here to give you pleasure i got more inches in these britches than a tape measure and while i hit hard she screamin how she likes it cause i'm so gentle on the street but in the room i'm a vikin damn i forgot the trojans so tell me who has em and once i put it on i'm going to give you orgasms i'll do nice and smooth hard and ruff what can you handle i'm just a razzle-dazzle pussy bangin pimp from Atlanta I fuck her once, i fuck twice, then it's poof and be gone cause in the sheets i make magic like houdini and wands 
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I've been cursed with this curse/to just blurt this bizzare shit/and it works/to help relieve the tension thats been eating me off my chest recently/and now i can rest again peacefully... -Eminem  P.S. Fuck all ya'll bitches lilkasper5@yahoo.com http://hiphopdirectory.com www.thugzprophesy.com I'M DA REMIX OF TUPAC & THE SEQUAL TO LUDWIG van BEETHOVEN
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06-09-04, 09:15 PM
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Bann The Deed NOT The Breed
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elevation keep droppin
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06-09-04, 10:01 PM
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I really like how you were making visual images with you words and that's a great start. On that note you need to work on your flow a little and expanding your creativity and vocab. This comes with time and even tho I didnt really like this piece I still thinkif you work at it youll become real good.
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06-11-04, 12:29 PM
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it wasn't meant to be good it was just some shit i wrote when i was bored.  
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I've been cursed with this curse/to just blurt this bizzare shit/and it works/to help relieve the tension thats been eating me off my chest recently/and now i can rest again peacefully... -Eminem P.S. Fuck all ya'll bitches lilkasper5@yahoo.com http://hiphopdirectory.com www.thugzprophesy.com I'M DA REMIX OF TUPAC & THE SEQUAL TO LUDWIG van BEETHOVEN
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06-17-04, 02:20 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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it was cool at 1st but u lost me during ur transition but u need 2 elevate & work on it a lil mo u'll get betta
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06-17-04, 02:21 PM
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♡»..::[[.вlιиgαα.]]::..«♡
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Kiid Gots Potential.. Evelate Some..!!!
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