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Old 06-14-04, 02:09 AM   #1
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Drama n Stress

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Drama n Stress
seems like that is all that is left
in this relationship wit us
I made a mistake in the past
but this is the present
I pray everyday but I just can’t seem 2 fa get it
you took a risk on me n I appreciate it
you helped me straitin up my life
an now I have everything orchestrated
girl you’re the one I want n now I got you
never eva wanna lose you
you keep me 2getha n wit out you I’d fall apart
I hope that I always stay in your heart
I hope we last and that we never fail
I’ll support you no matta what you do
baby this i promise you
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Old 06-14-04, 02:11 AM   #2
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Old 06-14-04, 02:29 AM   #3
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yo im feelin it that was pretty tight playa keep it up ight ~1~
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Old 06-14-04, 02:40 AM   #4
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thanx man...uppin
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Old 06-14-04, 03:22 AM   #5
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hope she forgave you after that shit...
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Old 06-14-04, 03:23 AM   #6
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Old 06-14-04, 03:31 AM   #7
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ya she did but we broke up bout a month or so afta
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Old 06-14-04, 06:02 PM   #8
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Old 06-14-04, 11:55 PM   #9
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damn...don't jus read it...hit me up n tell me what da hell u think bout it...feed back plz...
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Old 06-18-04, 02:15 AM   #10
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DAMN...Quit sleepin on dis...hit me up wit some feedback...
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Old 06-30-04, 08:21 PM   #11
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yo, this was noble of u man, you showed your emotions and feelings, and that your not afraid to display them for public viewing, thats a good quality, anyways, i liked it,
some raw shit
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Old 06-30-04, 08:28 PM   #12
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that was pretty dope had lots of emotion's and alot of feeling going toward the piece ..and i really found it good.. really impressed me...
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Old 06-30-04, 10:23 PM   #13
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Damn...thanx fa da feedback...uppin dis still...feed back plz
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Old 07-09-04, 02:48 AM   #14
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still uppin...hit me up wit feedback and i'll get back at some of ya stuff....
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Old 07-09-04, 06:11 AM   #15
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im feelin that homie nice drop.. reminds me of a past relationship.. she took a risk on you? was she over 18 and your under 18? just a guess.. haha aite 1
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