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Old 06-19-04, 11:38 AM   #1
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Yo my first rap on this site

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Yo dawgs this is my first rap on this site and im only 12


listen up all you dawgs im new here/
and this is were im gonna make my career/
yea this is were i start to rap/
ill snap at you like a steel trap/
i aint bothered what you say/
ill make it big one day/
no i aint into gangsta shit/
cause i just cant commit/
to being a smuggler, scramber pickpocket even a drug handler/


not very long just a verse but what od ya think
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Old 06-19-04, 02:04 PM   #2
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elevate
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man..im too ||ILL|| for word you thought i had ||AIDS|| in my |VOCABULARY||
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Old 06-19-04, 02:11 PM   #3
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elevate. im 12 also. look

this bitch is done im takin him to the gallows to get hung//
your rhymes are hopeless like a gangbang witout the tung//
if u thought u were winnin this battle u must be mistaken//
shoot, u bite likes from ruben studdard and clay aiken//
my rhymes and flow are famous, history in the makin//
every bar i write ur mom is most definelty breath taken//
im "con~testin" you, just like ur mom "mou~lestin" you//
my calender merkinings.. April, May, Gods Son, your due//
i flip you over like a pankcake bein cooked really easy//
ima be 1-0 after this battle ni**a u betta believe me//
Gods Son? after this battle jesus gunna be whoopin ur ass//
he's sendin u into hell after this, he so sorry he givin u a free bypass//
u better hope u got Francis Of Asscise or Moses on ur back//
cuz this battle is won by me bitch, hit the road jack// haha

remember im 12 also

make sure u have good structure too...

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Old 06-20-04, 11:56 AM   #4
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i know i need elevateing thats why im asking for someone to be my metor but no one seems to take any notice
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Old 06-20-04, 12:28 PM   #5
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aaaaaaaaw ... lolz
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Old 06-20-04, 01:36 PM   #6
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wat why u saying aawww whats wrong!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 06-20-04, 01:39 PM   #7
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nah nutin iz wrong am jus sayin init.. i mean itz ur 1st attempt so... keep tryin n u'll get ere... i wuz at ur stage once.. buh am getin betta...
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Old 06-20-04, 03:50 PM   #8
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aight its ok
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Old 06-20-04, 04:15 PM   #9
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hmmm....since its your first shot at it i'll give you....~props~
I mean everyone has to start at something so you'll do a lot of
elevating in the future........................

mine went from this: First Battle with Whiteboi217
to this: battle with bigpimpn'

may not be the best but I'm elevating

~I'm Out~
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Old 06-20-04, 05:26 PM   #10
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Yo Dat Was Koo

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Im 14 And Dat Was Pretty Good, But Im New 2 So If U Wanna Battle Wit Someone New Im Rite Here.
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Old 06-22-04, 12:03 PM   #11
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hey ill battle u if u is new yea and souljah u is pretty ill
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