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06-20-04, 11:59 PM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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MuSiC AnD SeX CoMbInEd....DeEp PiEcE
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aiight check this out
the way she swept me into her world; winds, strings, percussive acoustically, her voice musically moves til every fantasy touches her body's the concerto, manifesting the most captivating poisons a symphonic elixir carries her voice in vapor, even the sky moistens this beautiful tune soothes so deep she enticed my staff to balloon she's my acapella, so all variations of such themes are removed feeling consumed, pulsations induced when my muse resumes serenading me nude then our bodies fuse, developing sexual fugue glissando, I'll motion gentle explosions over an ensemble of flesh with 69 thematics of depth, I use my staff to deeply fondle her clef as an entendre for sex, this prose exposed her angelic cadenza make her organs orgasm till she hit the highest octave is my agenda and while I'm stiff, gliding in slits, moans of pleasure provide the riff she thought I was staccato, but my rhythm's almost too wide to fit she's writhed her hips...I only brought full strings for you to pluck so I gently force the chords, till both out spirits musically touch ~!1!~ feedback plz
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06-21-04, 12:05 AM
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Flyweight
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IP:
u pre-write this shit? haha...nice though. i liked the concept. peace
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06-21-04, 12:19 AM
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IP:
ya im just dropping writtens right now dont feel like typin somethin up
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06-21-04, 01:01 AM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP:
uppin for feedback ~!1!~
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06-22-04, 02:40 AM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP:
uppin for feedback ~!1!~
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06-22-04, 03:16 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
nice one man u must luv da chickk sum nice rhymes were thrown in.......good mixture n topic......i need sum honest votes on my battles plse
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06-22-04, 03:30 AM
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New to RB
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IP:
Yo, that shit was hot... Nice vocab, ya kept it flowin tha whole way through. it might jus be I'm a rook, but I can't find a real flaw in that verse. dope shit
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06-22-04, 06:51 PM
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IP:
good look on the feedback...and of course there isnt any flaws...we're talkin about flow intelligent here...never any flaws lol j/k uppin for more
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06-22-04, 09:33 PM
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..Intelligent Hoodlum..
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IP:
Nice piece
strange as hell LOL but nice piece i was feelin da concept and da way u done it nice dop
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06-22-04, 10:48 PM
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IP:
strange piece from a strange person lol....its all old shyt i used to write a while ago uppin for feedback
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06-22-04, 10:52 PM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
nice drop man i actually enjoyed that one most of these open mics are fuckin wack nice one though lookin forward to anutha pc
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06-23-04, 03:47 AM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP:
good look night...good to see open mics are appreciated
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