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07-04-04, 04:46 AM
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poetically and justifiably sick
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Smegal/golum
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ok...i am writing about..THE TWO TOWERS...i am Smegal/Gollum
alone at night, starlight, cursing i search...two little thieves mystically drawn, not caring about the rustling of the leaves the ring is my goal,blinded by envy and uncompromising greed like a cat drawn to feed...i must cause these thieves to bleed as i strike..unknowingly...hobbits sleep easy and i them awoke quickly i am captured,i feel guilt as a sword is held to my throat somethin trips in my head...a transition between good and evil... strangely now calm and peacefull...why is this happening to smegal? i feel unjustifiable sadness as the rope twists and burns..... i just want to be set free..they are my friends..on them i wont turn.. i want them to trust me...yet i know im unrelliable..schitzofrenic i long to be freed..from my alta ego..panic..and crazy psycho-manic please..i know the way to moldor..i can lead you to the black gate i want to help..avoiding treachury...i hope this journey isnt my fate... alone trembling..hiding from the voice in my head.... get out of there i said..i want to be friend not foe instead.. drawn to the ring as they sleep..overcome with greed i rise to my feet but fight i must...i can conquer this lust..and im not about to be defeat painfull scornfull fight,...but mentally this pain is deep in my head.. i long to get rid of...this time i only just manage to overcome the dread.. what do i want...who is stronger..am i gollumn?..or smegal???... well that debate could go on foreva..like EM or Royce?..bad or evil? |
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07-04-04, 04:47 AM
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poetically and justifiably sick
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IP:
DROP sum honest feedback on this piece.......................
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07-04-04, 05:35 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
shit was pretty good man nice drop
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07-04-04, 07:26 AM
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poetically and justifiably sick
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IP:
upin sum feed
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07-04-04, 11:55 AM
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#5
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Middle Weight
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IP:
nice good job keep it up
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07-04-04, 12:47 PM
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The Ups and Downs of Life
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IP:
nice job on this... I saw it already in the battle against LE- you both came pretty nice, props to you for only just having seen the movie---- and Dons sig is dope... 1
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07-04-04, 02:29 PM
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.::TopicaLProdigY:::.
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IP:
Nice spit mate come tight in this topical.
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07-06-04, 03:29 AM
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L.E
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IP:
Nice spit dawg gl in our battle..............
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07-16-04, 04:38 AM
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Banned: Cheating
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IP:
that's hot way to go
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07-17-04, 04:01 AM
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New to RV
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IP:
that was really good
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07-17-04, 04:11 AM
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Light Weight
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IP:
ay feelin dat liked da way u used both parts of da character...most def a hott drop
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07-17-04, 11:04 AM
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Thank You, Come Again
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IP:
gollums tha shit boy....i can do his voice so u know im down....any thing wit him is tha best...
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