iight

12 lines max
20mins

no crew
no hate

Im surprised u got the guts to clash me/
Did some1 tell u a lie and say u can trash me?/
Ull never win however way u attack me/
Ur 20 years old and still suffer from acne!/
I dnt care bout u and the crew u back/
U call ur country belgium, i call it Euro Trash/

Half way thru and Im almost done/
Just admit it uve already lost son/
Do u know for acne ppl use cream not cum/
The best advice is not always from ur mum/
No need to be shocked or stunned/
Check the talent/
Ive killed u and i aint evn swore once/

ay yo how yall doin my name is killah mc any 1 wanna battle me battle me

im a killa & im here to trash yo head /
ima smash it agenst a wall till u muthafuckin dead /
get ready to get yo ass kicked in this shit /
not givin a fuck bout the fagget im battlin with /
reach for dem desert E'z , i bet u be screamin for yo mommy /
im bout to kill ,got my nutz on yo chin,what would u do , i am the enemy /
what could u do if we if i start shootin on you /

enemy's im here to fuck y'al up with 1 shot /
droppin new flowz drive by with my crew pullin out my glock /
i am crayze runnin on d streetz /
bein a gangsta with sum new beatz /
u fucked up now , take anotha look at a warrior comin straight outta hell

i think that emm it was close but i have to hand it to Razor he killed u emasraw i think u got to get ur notebook out ight hehe

i dropped in 2 timez
pressed the wrong button at 7lines
errything iight i posted shit
12lines
peace

vote for this shit
honest votes needed
dont take it 2 long i aint got all day
pz

aight return tha favor on my links in my sig

openers-emasraw
structure-emasraw
metas-none
punches-hellrazor
closers-emasraw

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been open for 2long

i say emasraw won
hellrazors flow really lost my attention
so i definitely feel e won
v/emasraw

please vote 4 diss battle
amayze vs forgotten flow
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136031

emasraw had good structure opener and closure so my vote is emasraw.


vote: emasraw

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emasraW
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure is good...flow is on target...u had a few multis...no good wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

HellRaZoR
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its mad newbish...structure isnt good...some of ur lines were stretched...flow fell off due to the stretchnes...no multis...wack wordplay...none of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
neither had good wordplay...neither had connecting punches...neither had good personals...emasraW had the better structure...the more stable flow...and more multis...so basing off of that...emasraW gets my vote for the better overall verse...

VOTE - EMASRAW

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig against hotshh!...thanx...

hellrazor had no metaphores and he basically spit a weak verse that ooks like a freestyle i wasnt feeling him.em on the other hand spit crazy in the 1st few lines 'you call it belgium i call it euro trash'thats the bar of the week that was gansta and how he said mum instead of mom to flip it on him was gansta basically he didnt end it good enough but he still puuled through aganist a weak oppenant with a hard verse