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07-04-04, 01:49 PM
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The Light
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Brief key style-peep this
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makin a calaboration, peeps lined in admiration..
hyped like celebration,more known than masterbation.. its dedication!..that i give to hip hop and my raps.. flip-flopps..a fitted hat,a Tip-top shirt from Chaps..(polo) im the heir to the thrown,take my crown, and leave bare to ya dome.. critical-care you to floors,hit with more rights than left could ignore.. Im sicker than any disease will allow.if you got beef,battle it out right now.. fuck being patient, im wasted,im ready to introduce emcees faces to pavement.. leave bodies floored and adjacent,stopped in thier tracks like complacement.. i aint afraid to die, i take pills and pop acid to eyes.. so what makes you think id let you live for lashin out at this guy.. im on a mission to strait blast.. fuck going strait,came to a fork in the road and went back!.. flow is good if you consider the multies and the sylables UPPIn for feedback
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07-04-04, 01:55 PM
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IP:
pretty good fro a keystyle.keep reppin.your rhymes flow well and the structure is pretty good.7/10
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07-04-04, 02:05 PM
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New to RB
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IP:
Yea
Very Good 4 A Key Style I Feeling The Whole Thing But The Last 3 Lines I Particular Goood Shit Keep Working Hard 8-10 1 Luv |
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07-04-04, 03:21 PM
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The Light
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IP:
thanx yo.. uppin
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Can I Metaphor?
Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
Proud OYD member again
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07-05-04, 04:04 AM
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The Light
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IP:
uppin
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Can I Metaphor?
Mixtape Pushed Back to mid september.. Holla at me for a copy still I'm felt cause im real. Can you say the same ? Prolly not.
Proud OYD member again
. <------- That is whassup |
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