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Old 07-07-04, 01:45 AM   #1
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When i look at you

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When I look at you I begin to cry inside
you’re the one I let get away
baby ur still important to me
I still want u in my life
as a friend or one day maybe even more
but aslong as your happy then I can continue to move forward
right now I’m lost n it still hurts 2 know
that in the mornin I’ll still sorrow
I still miss u ever since that day ‘n’ it hurts 2 know you moved on right away
but like I said ur happy
n that is all dat matters 2 me baby please forgive me
for all the things I’ve done or said
cuz right now if it wasn’t for you
I’d still be pissin my life
away or maybe even dead

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Old 07-07-04, 01:48 AM   #2
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Feedback plz leave a link n i'll get back at u
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Old 07-08-04, 12:58 AM   #3
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plz hit me up wit some feedback
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Old 07-08-04, 10:01 PM   #4
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that poem is deep you got talent dawg
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Old 07-09-04, 02:45 AM   #5
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ay thx man...uppin dis feed back plz
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Old 07-09-04, 06:13 AM   #6
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n that is all dat matters 2 me baby please forgive me
for all the things I’ve done or said
cuz right now if it wasn’t for you
I’d still be pissin my life away or maybe even dead


im really feelin this piece..

emotional shit.. keep it up pimpin
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Old 07-10-04, 01:21 AM   #7
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itt was a pretty dope peice lots of feelin but very short
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Old 07-10-04, 01:56 AM   #8
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ay...thx fa the feedback...still uppin dis
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Old 07-11-04, 12:41 AM   #9
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plz quit sleepin on dis...feedback plz
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Old 07-12-04, 03:07 AM   #10
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Old 07-13-04, 09:01 PM   #11
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Old 07-16-04, 02:35 AM   #12
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uppin dis...
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Old 07-16-04, 02:36 AM   #13
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Old 07-16-04, 02:36 AM   #14
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that is a nice poem i like it alot
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Old 07-16-04, 02:40 AM   #15
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ty...uppin
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