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07-07-04, 01:45 AM | #1 | |
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When i look at you
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When I look at you I begin to cry inside you’re the one I let get away baby ur still important to me I still want u in my life as a friend or one day maybe even more but aslong as your happy then I can continue to move forward right now I’m lost n it still hurts 2 know that in the mornin I’ll still sorrow I still miss u ever since that day ‘n’ it hurts 2 know you moved on right away but like I said ur happy n that is all dat matters 2 me baby please forgive me for all the things I’ve done or said cuz right now if it wasn’t for you I’d still be pissin my life away or maybe even dead Last edited by The Mexican : 07-08-04 at 12:57 AM. |
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07-07-04, 01:48 AM | #2 | |
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Feedback plz leave a link n i'll get back at u
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07-08-04, 12:58 AM | #3 | |
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plz hit me up wit some feedback
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07-08-04, 10:01 PM | #4 | ||
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that poem is deep you got talent dawg
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07-09-04, 02:45 AM | #5 | |
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ay thx man...uppin dis feed back plz
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07-09-04, 06:13 AM | #6 | |
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n that is all dat matters 2 me baby please forgive me
for all the things I’ve done or said cuz right now if it wasn’t for you I’d still be pissin my life away or maybe even dead im really feelin this piece.. emotional shit.. keep it up pimpin |
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07-10-04, 01:21 AM | #7 | |
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itt was a pretty dope peice lots of feelin but very short
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07-10-04, 01:56 AM | #8 | |
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ay...thx fa the feedback...still uppin dis
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07-11-04, 12:41 AM | #9 | |
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plz quit sleepin on dis...feedback plz
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07-12-04, 03:07 AM | #10 | |
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uppin
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07-13-04, 09:01 PM | #11 | |
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feedback plz
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07-16-04, 02:35 AM | #12 | |
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uppin dis...
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07-16-04, 02:36 AM | #13 | |
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leave a link n i'll hit u back
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07-16-04, 02:36 AM | #14 | ||
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that is a nice poem i like it alot
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07-16-04, 02:40 AM | #15 | |
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ty...uppin
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