I spark tools and it's true I could feel ya wit lead/
homeboy the only reason ya hot cause a chic wit a STD probaily gave you head/
If you had a deal they a say you was the best cause ya battled me and now ya dead/
you only realy hot when you die and there ain't no more Pac or BIGs/
I could be the one to report it to ya family and friends/ that half of These niggas wanta be G's and they life pretend/ the type to get a wife and for her life they spend/ cause they think the girls fine/ I'm a pimp, a bitch of mine don't get a dime/ that's what I try to tell them / cause I don't buy dreams I sell them/ I'm a young nigga wit a OG head for brains/ I got a range so I don't steal nothing but a bitch mind through game/ I'm on track that's just how I ride it when attentions undivided that's when you tell a ho she misguided and undecided/ the hood no all the news so ain't a damn thing private/ I try to keep it smooth making dough selling crack in high school/ thats just my rules I'm a senior and I bang wit piru's/ And if you ain't no, they gangs in the south to/ Nigga!!!

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MurkShells

tell a nigga what ya'll think bout this !!!

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MurkShells

tell me what all ya'll think bout this shit here Shaty!!

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MurkShells

This keystyle is hot if you don't think so say something read people I need feedback
oh and vote in the battle section with me versus da joka it's a topic battle about a drug deal gone bad so vote on who's deal went badder know what 'm talking bout
hollalol

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MurkShells

upping for feed back

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MurkShells

aight nigga slow down ya lines...elevate ya punches..flow iz aight,,get a betta structure..then u be fine but u elevated frum wen i first saw yur verses dawg B-Real dawg wun

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do CD's sell buy motherfuckers reading the artist rhymes nah they fucking listen structure don't got a damn thing to do wit ya flo it comes from the spiter how he spits ya'll on this site can't read just my rhymes and say what help I need cause from what I red fom most of ya'll pound for pound I'm the realist the best and the greatest waitill my new speakers come it's time for takeover ya'll done fucked up

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MurkShells

you need to fix up ur structure kinda boring other than that nice job.. hit up my collab with legacy

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