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07-12-04, 02:52 PM
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Simply Dope
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Takin Ill To A New Level
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My desert eagle bangs harder than four fifteen inch subs
When i spit my rhymes i get ur mind spinnin faster than dubs Talk shit imma cut all ur fingers off n leave u wit stubs Im starting my reign just like the chicago cubs My rhymes hit u harder than bats made of pine Only thing i got corked is a bottle of white wine The way ill deal wit fake emcees is put u all in a line Unload a round wit fury leavin ur vision blurry Your dyin out just like Keith Murray Now i gotta dip outta there in a hurry Cuz the cops on the way n i dont wanna c da jury   |
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07-12-04, 05:55 PM
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Simply Dope
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IP:
uppin for some feedback
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07-12-04, 06:12 PM
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IP:
Structure wasn't great, but it was a so-so self gloryfying piece. Coulda been better if you had put more complexity in it.
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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07-12-04, 06:13 PM
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IP:
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Lyrics One Man Crew Most of 'em hate me, and it's a rare one who loves me Niggas fillin' up with rage but they ain't gettin' above me And after all the battles, the wins are no longer surprising Pushin' bar after bar, takin' over the game, revolutionizing Never thought of takin' help from others, see, I'm too proud And every battle raises the volume of a voice speaking aloud |
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07-12-04, 06:33 PM
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Flyweight
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IP:
this wasnt bad. it could of been better though
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07-12-04, 10:59 PM
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Simply Dope
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IP:
uppin
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07-13-04, 07:50 PM
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Simply Dope
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IP:
u gotta b kiddin me 20 views n only 2 peeps givin feedback damn
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