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Old 07-14-04, 01:32 AM   #1
Durmil
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|i Am Durmil| |i Am Ill|

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I am shattering flattering masculine rappers in the abdomen
Travelin, stabbing in larger wounds then a leviathan javalin
Its about time foul rhymes devour kinds raising eye brow lines
I reign (rain) supreme like taking a leak off the top of cloud-nine

I got rappin’ locked down too, ya'll best to bite something
Cuz I drop more bars than officials in midget high jumpin
Long ammo and a long range, it’ll teach you cats to run a mile
And then leave a gap in ya teeth like Proof when he smiles

Startin to learn how this board do it, I'm quick to slay posers
Back to the picture, image is gangsta like fifty cent posters
Fuck bitches half of ya dreams = half my established esteem
And im so gully I’ll rock a casual tee while causin casualtee’s

Fuck all you wastes, and fuck punchlines I’d rather punch ya face
Durm equipped wit knuckles holdin more brass then a trumpet case
I'm too crazy for most, Got my psychiatrist put in an institution
Used to poke fun in court, Running train's on the female prosicution

You wanna take a shot at me? I advise you not to try it G
I've got the game locked down and theres no finding the key
Not like I'm Santa Claus, But I am sayin i move rap(wrap) far
Durmil soon to run this bored(board) like unamused trackstars

Simply de-rib cats, Poppa (pop a) spine u'd think I'm bringin biggie back
Only time ya emcees over my head is when I'm givin piggie backs



*Not tryin to spark beef or diss anyone out there....just felt like adressin some skill to this board and do my rap thang....

uppin for sum feed

Last edited by Durmil : 07-14-04 at 02:06 PM.
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Old 07-14-04, 01:07 PM   #2
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how bout some feed.....
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Old 07-14-04, 03:08 PM   #3
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That was a hot spit

had ill wordplay in there, vocab was fire, some funny and entertaining lines

goos shit, keep it up
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Old 07-14-04, 05:23 PM   #4
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^^^thanc for dat.....mo feed would be nice
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Old 07-14-04, 08:09 PM   #5
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nice vocab man and incredible multis. i like it alot.
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Old 07-14-04, 08:25 PM   #6
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this was pretty tight shit... hot vocab
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Old 07-14-04, 08:36 PM   #7
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Pretty nice man... yo were startin up II again..

its gonna be called Explicit Thoughts

but we still II.. since you been in II you can get in ET if you want in.. just post up in the forum..
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Old 07-14-04, 08:41 PM   #8
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nice drop flow was crazy vocab was there.....................
multis were hott.....basically everything was

check out my open mic *Chocolate Time* (dont ask peeps)
link in my siggy..............
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Old 07-15-04, 01:40 PM   #9
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thanx ya'll...i was goin for the whole vocab-meta angle wit this piece

uppin for mo f/b...
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Old 07-16-04, 01:44 AM   #10
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more feedback ya'll.....................
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Old 07-16-04, 01:57 AM   #11
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i like that spit it's was kewl
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Old 07-16-04, 06:36 AM   #12
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kool poem
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Old 07-16-04, 11:32 PM   #13
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^^^^not a poem homie...lol

mo f/b
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