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07-14-04, 01:33 PM
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Childhood Memories (Mosiac Collab: Shadow and Limited Edition)
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Shadow A'iyo child hood memories as i look back wondering bout all the things ive done- i struggled through hardtimes and lived through fun- some things were scary......some things were not- i was mischevious..keyin up carz in the parkin lot- now i look back on that..... wondering why?- i coulda did good in school ....if i just tried- i look back on my child hood.. it getz me mad- instead of causing trouble..good times i coulda had- i now look back on my life and its filled with triumph and sorrow- becuz of actionz then who knows what will happen tomorow- i coulda been good an my parents woulda thought it was terrific- im sorry for the things i did but theres no way to fix it Limited Edition A'yo...check it... Ma memories are cursed in ways that only Hell beholds I wish I could forget...about the things my past holds But no...I reflect each and everyday of when I was eight Why can't things be like then...it must be my fate I can recall the day perfectly...I was completely free I wanted everybody's attention...the world was about me We were going to the city...to the zoo to see the monkeys Giraffes, bears...I was surprised my mom could stomch me Everybody is happy...my Grandparents both still alive I remembered that was the day when I first wished to drive There is a flash...like I nightmare I sit straight up Compared to these times now...my happy past...is made up |
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07-14-04, 01:42 PM
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nice drop fellas, every important aspect was present, flow, grammar, structure, this was a very good emotional piece, both your verses complimented eachothers and didnt sway off topic.....i liked this a lot...props to both
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07-15-04, 01:00 AM
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IP:
Thanks...uppin...
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07-15-04, 11:28 AM
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bingo!
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uppin^^^
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01-15-05, 03:24 PM
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IP:
Wow...this is sooooooooooo old...and it did not recieve shit for feedback...
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01-15-05, 03:44 PM
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IP:
Drop A Link to an Open Mic which you left decent feed on soon or this will be closed
I'm sure It will get feed now.Even though its old,I'd appreciate it if you leave links to something you gave feed on.Just to keep the cycle goin feel?
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