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07-17-04, 03:05 AM
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Where's my crown...
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Yo... Check it... You can say i suck, but fuck it cause im still the best... The one open micer on the site that will impress... I lose to none, plus i could kill the rest... Exposin faggot rappers more than paris hiltons breasts... If i aint beffin with you yet, then here's your warning... Before you end up livin ur life in fear and mourning... Untill everyone can see where your tears are forming... Ive been told im not the best, that i am second rate... That i showed up to the award ceremony a second late... That their aint no point in tryin, that id be testin fate... But fuck that, prove me wrong or hold your tounge... To shut me up good you'd have to pull a gun... Test me and see, the reason you chose the wrong "chump"... I aint pathetic like you thought, i aint no pond scum... I aint the result of an accident without a condum... Chorus... x2 Fuck you if you didnt believe, or didnt listen to me... For all i care you should be fistin a sheep... And no longer am i here as the nice guy... Fuck with me, and dawg you just might die... See all the crews lying dead, and consider them fools... Get rid of fagget crews quicker than notzees get rid of da jews... But ill be nicer, cause yall are RB citizens to... Ur just mad cause im gettin bigga den you... So i guess the question sounds, Wheres my crown... Though some of you motherfuckers cant bear my sound... Pissed of that i just declared my reign... You cant even hardly bear my name... Breathin down the necks of people on this site for too long... Showed um their aint nothin that i do bad, or do wrong... My rhymes a level above everyone else, something to keep in mind... Make everyone else seem like they dont even try... So just keep this for your peace of mind... Fuck you... And no i didnt mean to be so kind... Chorus... x2 Fuck you if you didnt believe, or didnt listen to me... For all i care you should be fistin a sheep... And no longer am i here as the nice guy... Fuck with me, and dawg you just might die... |
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07-18-04, 02:45 PM
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IP:
Upping...
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07-21-04, 10:41 AM
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IP:
Upping...
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07-21-04, 04:45 PM
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Flyweight
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IP:
eh u need some work not too much ur ok
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07-23-04, 01:04 PM
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IP:
^You dont even know skill... Upping...
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07-24-04, 07:30 PM
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IP:
Cant someone give me feedback?
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07-24-04, 07:42 PM
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Light Weight
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IP:
dawg u need work on dat shit yo structure and flow are all fucked u on dat u need to work
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07-24-04, 08:13 PM
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fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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IP:
dat shit good but sounds like sumtin lil bow wow wrote in 3rd grade up ur vocabulary work on multies,punches,metaphors etc. but keep at it bro keep doin yo thing...n dare not say i dont kno skill been listenin 2 shit since 5yrs old n writin since 15 n im 20 so jus take da advice n constructive criticism peace out holla
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07-26-04, 03:44 PM
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IP:
Yo what the fuck? Yall cant even touch these multies and you say i need work? I dont care if u dont like it... But tell me something real... I know my structure is almost the best it can be... My flow is smooth... What the fuck you hatin for?
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07-26-04, 04:00 PM
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IP:
On Audio It Could Be Nice...
But On Text It Lacks Depth... And Structure And Flow Are Fine, That Kid Didnt Know What He Was Talking About... But Ya, That Just Wasnt A Good Topic For Text... |
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07-26-04, 04:02 PM
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IP:
Guess not... Shits getting hated on... I guess, if they dont like it though... They better start pluggin their ears... Starting August 10 im gonna start droppin open mics like unwanted babies...
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