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07-19-04, 04:21 AM
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Rhyme Sayer
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I'm not just a rhyme sayer
I'm not just a time player I ain't your average bitch that makes your faces twitch I'm not just a BS sayer I'm not a dinner prayer I ain't your little hoe so I suggest you get up and go. I'm not a cake layer I'm definitly not your bill payer I may not be the one for you You may as well accept that we're through
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07-19-04, 08:01 AM
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yawn
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ehhh, more of a really short open mic. But i guess i could see it as one of those accopella ones at a coffee house or something. Not too bad. 5/10
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07-19-04, 08:52 AM
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IP:
its not open mic, its a poem
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07-19-04, 04:20 PM
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<<-Carpe Noctum->>
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it was decent for what it was, it rhymed and shit, try to have more emotion in your words....keep it up
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