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Old 07-21-04, 12:02 AM   #1
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It Don't Hurt No More

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It don't hurt no more when we touch it don't hurt no more when we feel,all i wanted was you to keep it real,dont tell me you out with your boyz when you was with that nasty hoe kiesha omills cause i know how you feel you be wishin i get off ya case but you reallly dont know that i'ma be all up in ya face.but damn look atcha now all mad and confused cause yah hoe let ya down .like i told you before ,it dont hurt nomore when we touch it dont hurt nomore when we feel cause you gone and i dont have to go through that pain again.

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Old 07-21-04, 02:50 AM   #2
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i liked it,but think it should've been a lil longer,but overall it was a decent piece,..
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Old 07-21-04, 03:32 AM   #3
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isnt this a weak pop song?
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Old 07-23-04, 09:48 PM   #4
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lmmao@Phenom-in-all n e ways good drop i agree dv8 it was a li short but ya got ya point made good drop youngin keep postin holla
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Old 07-24-04, 01:04 AM   #5
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it's ok phenom-in-all cause i'm just gettin into this so thanx fa the post.
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Old 07-24-04, 02:14 PM   #6
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damn this really got personal u used the gurls name and shit, it's very nice though.. i know whut this feels like, i don't know a person who haven't went through hard times with a loved one..

"It don't hurt no more when we touch it don't hurt no more when we feel,all i wanted was you to keep it real,dont tell me you out with your boyz when you was with that nasty hoe kiesha omills"

^you really spilled ya heart into this, keep up the work ma, and peep my poem called ~**My Piano**~`
good job..
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Old 07-24-04, 11:29 PM   #7
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thanx missfiyagurl
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