you drop first
-No Rules
-One Round
-First With Three Votes Wins
-And Let The Battle Begin

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whoa shit man... youve gotta tell me if you gonna set up a battle like that

ill check in when i can drop

one

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haha... right.. so you did pm me.. i checked it after i saw this in my slots..lol

oy lets make it two rounds... cos like.. ima drop right? then since its no rules you can feed off my verse, flip punches, whatever... then ill do the same to yours, then you drop a second time, same deal... otherwise make it no feeding so its fair.. dunno why you would though.. cos 2 verses favors you..

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yo, ima pierce ya chest with spears n techs, ya get shot, popped n soon ya knocked
when ya peep my rap, ya jaw drops.. not just cos im dope, but ya make room fa cocks
yo, im signed my bustin rocks, check it kid, spit acid leave ya lyin ruptured hot
son, I got no respect for gangsta wannabes.. only thing you ridin ruff is cocks
pumped n locked, steady to show herbs n noobs that bands reppin it dope
this wannabes like a loaded glock.. the kids always ready to blow!
yo watch me "reel in the votes" once im done "liftin out ya lines"
this kids "bitin his hooks" .. theres somethin "fishy bout ya rhymes"


meh.. all ima drop is 8 lines.. go for ya life man.. n let me know if its one or two verses

one

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this is funny i wanna know how would this turn out

vote on my battles the favor will be returned

Look you wanna be Obie Trice, motha fucka i'm droppin the dice but i aint rappin for my life
Let's get this right, you think goin 2 rounds might favor me, it'll favor you fo' sho' aight
Don't act like we tight cuz this aint quite a battle man it's a lyrical fight
My rhymes so ruthless that they'll knock out yo' lights
You call yourself a One Man Band?
This aint rock, this rap and if you aint used to it then don't come back to rap music
You didn't just come to rap you flew to it
Rap didn't work for you so go rock, go back to it
That name is simulated to you, straight pussy and there's proof to it
Like your rhymes shown
My shit just put your nose on to the grindstone
And you call yourself the master of mul-ties?
I'll merk the shit out of you in every category and win with ease
Please man why would you fuck with shit relentless as this?
Should just call this a 186 cuz i haven't murdered you yet bitch
Goin against you aint a risk cuz i control you dude like i was your ventriloquist
The most illest of our time rhymin with many buckets full of skills
Your rhymes stink so bad that it had everyone rapidly leave the building like it was a fire drill
I know my rhymes give you chills all the way up yo' spine faster than plants fill with chlorophyll
So man get real cuz you aint ill, my rhymes kill yours faster then i actually could one of those bitches from Sill
So call this a 187 now cuz my rhymes murderd yours from a-z
From 7 11 to a gro-ce-ry store man don't you resent goin against me?

i want 1 verse

Now uppin for votes

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u both had more personals but ruff ur multis n punches were better good wordplay by both overall ruff rida u get my vote

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Quality Not Quanity

Overal This Battle Was Weak... One Man Band Had Better Smaller Verse Than Long But Not As Strong Verse But Ruff... Some Wordplay Was Played.... Still Had Decent Punches And Took It For One Man Bad....Also Has Better Structure....

My Vote--- One Man Band....

Return Favor And Vote Fairly On My Battle....
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137169

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Aite, Ruff took this with jus all around better verse, more punches in there, and its better to have a lot of decent punches than a few pretty good ones.. One man decent verse, too many multis tho, u need to focus on ya other aspects of ya verses.. Not bad tho... Ruff elevate man, not a bad verse from u tho, nice punches in there... Ruff gets my vote wit better punches and a more consistent verse...

good battle both of you let me say that 1st off but ruff rydah won this with the punches
structure needed to be chopped down but you still had good meta's and good punches that connected
band ya punches were not connecting with ruff's jaw you had good structure but was not good enough
you both could use some personals

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One man band over played the gay concept, get original dude...not as good as punches as ruff, so my v goes to ridah

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breaking this shit down

One-Man-Band

yo, ima pierce ya chest with spears n techs, ya get shot, popped n soon ya knocked
when ya peep my rap, ya jaw drops.. not just cos im dope, but ya make room fa cocks
nice opening 5/10

yo, im signed my bustin rocks, check it kid, spit acid leave ya lyin ruptured hot
son, I got no respect for gangsta wannabes.. only thing you ridin ruff is cocks
personal aint that hard 6/10

pumped n locked, steady to show herbs n noobs that bands reppin it dope
this wannabes like a loaded glock.. the kids always ready to blow!
fucked the rhyme at the end not much of a punch 3/10

yo watch me "reel in the votes" once im done "liftin out ya lines"
this kids "bitin his hooks" .. theres somethin "fishy bout ya rhymes"
not bad not good either 4/10

18/40
4.5/10

ok the verse wasnt that good you had a personal and a punch good structure and flow its just not enough you need harder punches and improve your vocab and imagination
plus writting in small font really doesnt help


Ruffridah187


Look you wanna be Obie Trice, motha fucka i'm droppin the dice but i aint rappin for my life
Let's get this right, you think goin 2 rounds might favor me, it'll favor you fo' sho' aight
not sure about the flow you forced the second line to rhyme 4/10

Don't act like we tight cuz this aint quite a battle man it's a lyrical fight
My rhymes so ruthless that they'll knock out yo' lights
nice but where is the punch 4/10

You call yourself a One Man Band?
This aint rock, this rap and if you aint used to it then don't come back to rap music
no flow shit over all 1/10

You didn't just come to rap you flew to it
Rap didn't work for you so go rock, go back to it
forced to rhyme with a semipunch 4/10

That name is simulated to you, straight pussy and there's proof to it
Like your rhymes shown
My shit just put your nose on to the grindstone
best so far 5/10

And you call yourself the master of mul-ties?
I'll merk the shit out of you in every category and win with ease
no punch 4/10

Please man why would you fuck with shit relentless as this?
Should just call this a 186 cuz i haven't murdered you yet bitch
ok 4/10

Goin against you aint a risk cuz i control you dude like i was your ventriloquist
The most illest of our time rhymin with many buckets full of skills
no real rhyme 4/10

Your rhymes stink so bad that it had everyone rapidly leave the building like it was a fire drill
I know my rhymes give you chills all the way up yo' spine faster than plants fill with chlorophyll
better bar of the battle 7/10

So man get real cuz you aint ill, my rhymes kill yours faster then i actually could one of those bitches from Sill
So call this a 187 now cuz my rhymes murderd yours from a-z
From 7 11 to a gro-ce-ry store man don't you resent goin against me?
no rhyme again 3/10

40/100
4/10

this verse lacked structure and flow and me judging on the hole thing instead of picking the punches that i like and give you a win you had harder punches fair enough but the rest is shit so the average pulled you down i say if you wrote smaller verse with the good punches in it you would'v won it

my vote goes to one man band for having a better flow structure it was close the battle wasnt great
vote;1manband

with respect for both of you

hit up my battles

nice battle...not bein too full of myself but i think i got this one....oh yea....where is your buddy ibraheem that you told to vote as soon as i dropped? Was thatsomethin try to tell someone to vote for you as soon as i drop? That's pretty cheap man and no don't need 2 rounds....1 round...peace

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man its called returnin a favor... lets have another battle where i spend more than 2 minutes keyin up my verse.. youre a noob man.. ill rip you anyday...

and dont be proud cos of your shitass votes man.. ya punches n wordplay were weak as shit... half ya lines didnt make sense and you had NO multies man... na ya shit was stretched.. i used 3 personals that any vet would tell you connected, and some wordplay to finish... all in multi... that tied in...

look man.. if you do end up winnin we need a rematch cos i know my shit.. Ive been in the game for years an im not gettin beat by some shitass textcee that aint pick up a mic in his life........

dont go gettin all cocky n shit sayin i got my buddy "ibraheem" ... I never even seen him before i just wanted a favor on this battle... happens a lot man... return favors HONESTLY, is how people get votes..

man call me cheap.. ya herb ass spits 20+ lines after seein my 8.. n then doesnt accept 2 verses...

i dont give a shit if youre black, white or orange.. but with a name like "ruffridah187" i can see your some kid that dont know shit... n i dont normally mouth off like this but when some punk gangsta wannabe kid spits some wack shit at me n then gets herb votes, i dont appreciate that..

heres what i reckon we should do: ill get admin or mods to erase all votes, then edit my verse so its as long as yours, n u can either leave yours or write it again.. or we go for a 2nd round n leave our first verses the way they are.. or fuck that, we finish up votes, ill even ignore the hate and badly explained votes.. n then we rematch...

?

One

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look voting is easy spitting is hard i swear if i spit as good as i vote i call myself tupac
just to let you know how i vote
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ i dont just fucking brake the bars i break the lines into 7 sections give 2 or one point on each for example good punch 2 weak punch 1
imagination 2
vocab1
punch 2
personal2
flow1
humer2
relating the first line to the second 2

i know its fucking complicated judging each bar like that and i dont want you to do it like me i just want a fuckin honest vote that is explained enough

peace