10 lines

1 hr drop

no hate clit dik sukin crew votes

g'luck

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killing fake emcees like a Isolated~Orphan/
u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//

blood hound i break u , so u better divorce yah verse
cause i snap yah curse, and send ur body to the hurse
i break yah optics and break your topics
and send u to the gutter and break in ur virgin mother


look this bitch is so dyslexic
his rhymes cant produce text that spose to be threats
ill see ill make u bleed
your body fluids will flow internally
mentally ill see yah life burnt like yah family



gdluck quiky keystyle2 min flow

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killing fake emcees like a Isolated~Orphan/
u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//

Sometimes I rap gangsta, thats why these cats don't like me/
The knife put a gash on ya face like you rap for Nike/
Play around and i'll blast ya wifey/
You be the first to talk shit but the LAST to fight me/
Bitch please, I don't tolerate shit talkers/
I won't even hit a punch now, cuz to you that shits akward/
See me in that black coupe, "watch as he passes"/
Cuz i'll bury you in the dirt like im takin botany classes/
Cops'll detain ya nerd flows/
I just bitch slapped you to next Sunday, I guess that explains the church flows/ haha

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i meant "cops'll detain ya nerd flows/ I just bitch slapped you to next sunday, i guess that explains the church clothes/"

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uppin for votes ....................................#1

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killing fake emcees like a Isolated~Orphan/
u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//

stop sleepin on my battles and vote before i flip out

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Blood dat openin was a killa. Tolerant i couldnt flow wit your drop at all datz why im givin it 2 blood.(Blood)Your flow waz good and at least had more punchez.
v Blood
Vote Me vs. Jacket

uppin for votes, stop sleepin on the battles, don't just look at them.. VOTE

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Tolerant Level
structure is good...flow is good for the most part...u had some multis...wack wordplay...none of ur punches connected...all the ones u had were played and/or wack...no good personals...

4Blood2Hound0
dont put the /s at the end of ur lines...its newbish...structure is ok...flow was pretty good...no multis...wack wordplay...a few of ur punches connected...no good personals...

Overall
Tolerant Level had the better structure...both had a good flow...neither had multis...neither had good wordplay...neither had good personals...4Blood2Hound0 had more connecting punches...so basing off of that...punches r more important that a good structure...so 4Blood2Hound0 gets my vote...

VOTE - 4BLOOD2HOUND0

PLEASE return the favor with an honest vote on the first link in my sig, against tech05...thanx...

u dumb i had multis on every section that vote is miss interpreted i think it shouldnt stand this fool dont kno wat myults are or a personal u dumb u retard

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killing fake emcees like a Isolated~Orphan/
u think u have skills step to me so i can Dislocate~ur~Organs//

opening:4 blood
multi's: nethier, tolerant ya multis were simple
flow:4 blood
metas: 4 blood
rest was even
vote 4 blood
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136172

im gonna give it to blood cuz the overall battle was a killa blood hound vote for me in ym battles man!

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I'll giv it to Blood for a good opening after that you went comercial the '/' at the end of your lines are newbish I used to do it. Fair play tho'

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Black Man White(BMW)
No Grudges.

Return da fav http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982

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Black Man White(BMW)
No Grudges.

2b2h was harder and flow was good like every thing else

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