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Old 07-26-04, 08:20 PM   #1
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One Nation Under God
Part one- The Day everything changed

I remember the anger inside me, and how my pride was humbled
It was Septmember 11th, 2001, the day the Towers tumbled
I remember crying in my hands, "How in Gods Creation"
I watched my TV closely, waiting for Bush's retaliation
Days went by still nothing, is this President not a Man
October 4th, 2001, the day I took matter into my Hands!
Packed my suitcase, grabbed my passport, off to Afghanistan

Part Two -Arrival

My life was usually filled with peace, but now all i know is drama
My first mission to find the Taliban, then Ill surely find Osama
Disguised as a Middle Eastern Woman, my face covered by sheath
I set up camp in a small village, in the LAND THAT EATS NO BEEF
My heart now filled with hate, "Why can I just be more Forgiving"
I met with Abdul the next morning, he deals Arms for a living

Part Three- Hero or Terrorist

I could have waited for Bush to act, or even the United Nations
It's funny what money can buy, I had the Talibans exact location
Three days straight I rode, with just my weapons and a lamp
Finally just over the Horizon, now I can see the Talibans Camp
Just then two men grabbed me, covered my head I couldn't see
I couldnt understand their words, their intentions to rape me
A westerner captured in a land, that America had Forgotten
They uncovered my sheath, and I saw the Devil, it was Bin Laden
I looked deep into his eyes, searching for any bit of compassion
I knew that I was about to die, I felt my whole world crashing
Maybe he would let me live, if he knew the pain my people felt
Just then I remembered the grenade, I had strapped it to my belt
I grabbed the grenade, Hugged Osama, as I heard the voices call
ONE NATION UNDER GOD, INDIVISIBLE, WITH LIBERTY & JUSTICE

FOR ALL!
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Old 07-26-04, 08:35 PM   #2
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yoo dat shit was tight u stayed on tofic and da shit was i'll and i like da ending plus all yo shit flowed together nice shit
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Old 07-26-04, 08:38 PM   #3
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thanks appreciate it, uppin...........................................
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Old 07-26-04, 09:01 PM   #4
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Old 07-26-04, 09:16 PM   #5
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this is for feedback, not stupid comments.................
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Old 07-26-04, 09:27 PM   #6
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Old 07-26-04, 09:30 PM   #7
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okay first of all it was a stupid question. secondly i dropped a comment in your open mic to show you what a stupid comment is. third, kid you aint even on my level so beat it.
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Old 07-26-04, 09:33 PM   #8
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Old 07-26-04, 09:36 PM   #9
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if your shit is hot how are they going to be swayed. doesn't anxiety mean nervous, cuz your acting real nervous right now.
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Old 07-26-04, 09:39 PM   #10
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Old 07-26-04, 09:43 PM   #11
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again this all goes back to your stupid original comments. so lets take it to where this began. anyways drop it and get out of here.
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Old 07-27-04, 03:18 PM   #12
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uppin for feedback..........................................
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Old 10-20-04, 04:58 PM   #13
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damn man...that was truly a dope piece..very dope...i would of loved to see it a shade longer....maybe another 10 lines...a few to eac part..but this was dope..syllable count was damn near perfect..rhyme scheme was really good...choice of words was really good...story was realy good...and message was superb...this is a good cantidate for OM of the month....no joke...keep bangin bro...
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