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One Nation
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One Nation Under God
Part one- The Day everything changed I remember the anger inside me, and how my pride was humbled It was Septmember 11th, 2001, the day the Towers tumbled I remember crying in my hands, "How in Gods Creation" I watched my TV closely, waiting for Bush's retaliation Days went by still nothing, is this President not a Man October 4th, 2001, the day I took matter into my Hands! Packed my suitcase, grabbed my passport, off to Afghanistan Part Two -Arrival My life was usually filled with peace, but now all i know is drama My first mission to find the Taliban, then Ill surely find Osama Disguised as a Middle Eastern Woman, my face covered by sheath I set up camp in a small village, in the LAND THAT EATS NO BEEF My heart now filled with hate, "Why can I just be more Forgiving" I met with Abdul the next morning, he deals Arms for a living Part Three- Hero or Terrorist I could have waited for Bush to act, or even the United Nations It's funny what money can buy, I had the Talibans exact location Three days straight I rode, with just my weapons and a lamp Finally just over the Horizon, now I can see the Talibans Camp Just then two men grabbed me, covered my head I couldn't see I couldnt understand their words, their intentions to rape me A westerner captured in a land, that America had Forgotten They uncovered my sheath, and I saw the Devil, it was Bin Laden I looked deep into his eyes, searching for any bit of compassion I knew that I was about to die, I felt my whole world crashing Maybe he would let me live, if he knew the pain my people felt Just then I remembered the grenade, I had strapped it to my belt I grabbed the grenade, Hugged Osama, as I heard the voices call ONE NATION UNDER GOD, INDIVISIBLE, WITH LIBERTY & JUSTICE FOR ALL!
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yoo dat shit was tight u stayed on tofic and da shit was i'll and i like da ending plus all yo shit flowed together nice shit
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thanks appreciate it, uppin...........................................
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this is for feedback, not stupid comments.................
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IP:
okay first of all it was a stupid question. secondly i dropped a comment in your open mic to show you what a stupid comment is. third, kid you aint even on my level so beat it.
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if your shit is hot how are they going to be swayed. doesn't anxiety mean nervous, cuz your acting real nervous right now.
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again this all goes back to your stupid original comments. so lets take it to where this began. anyways drop it and get out of here.
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uppin for feedback..........................................
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damn man...that was truly a dope piece..very dope...i would of loved to see it a shade longer....maybe another 10 lines...a few to eac part..but this was dope..syllable count was damn near perfect..rhyme scheme was really good...choice of words was really good...story was realy good...and message was superb...this is a good cantidate for OM of the month....no joke...keep bangin bro...
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Seek & Destroy
We have fun in my basement Time is not long, and indecision is hells cemment. So the well is rented, untill heaven is relevant. Untill then, to be eloquent, sex cells, so le'ts cellibate. "watch what you watchin...fox keeps feedin' us toxin's..stop sleepin' start thinkin outside of the box and unplug from the matrix doctrine....but watch what you say cause big brother is watchin" - nas - sly fox The I.H.C.J.S.F.M.T.R.H.P.M.M.W.T.S.M.S.I.T.F.F.W.A.S. O Crew
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