iight yo i gave you time drop in 10 mins

house rules son
good luck
~1~

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checkin in...

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well im droppin...

ayo...
1~kid please, ur shyt is far from complex or ill/
but wen i speak, it makes ya fuckin heart stand still//
2~u dissin in the cyphers, but on tha battleground/
im dodgin ya punches, n im jus playin around//
3~u weak dawg, 4 letter words wont cut it/
tryna rap wen u soundin like a baby Ruben Studdard//
4~Ima end dis shyt quick so u wont embarrass urself/
all ya punches keep sayin is "im bad for ya health"//*
5~im smokin dis herb while actually smokin sum herb/
n bytch, im spittin fire so u bound to git burned//
6~u new up in the shyt wit sum unkown crew/
git all ya bois up in here, i grill dem too//
7~u cant touch me if i were to try-n-git-hit/
got sum banana clips im jus dyin-to-split//
8~im trashin dis wack rapper like no-good leaves/
but my punches leavin u stiffer den Christopher Reeves//

*Complex Illness:u try to act hard when u like dickz ya self
I might not of told u yet but my skillz bad fo ya health

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My verse is winning so nigga u need to Read-it
Dont Tell me Good Luck when u really Need-it
Man i forgot that im so sikk why u dont like Chick
You got that in ya name cause u allways come in SixX
Man this is like a war and ur shitz about to Fall
The Best "Shot" u got at me is shootin a Basket-Ball
Can't Beleave u accually tryed to beat me son
Skill Callibur for u iz like from 0-10 u got a 1
4 wins compared to u niggaz thatz a Lot
U Spit that whack shit and thatz all you Got
IM Nice Wit a Mic Divice right Fuckin Ass
Breakin ya bonez and shit nigga leavein ya hole body in a CAst

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

I say Sixx had it cuz he had better punchez ,flow, and structure. Complex was good too.
Punches-sixx
flow-sixx
structure-sixx
opener-sixx
closer-illness
personalz-illness
v/sixx

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vote honestly on deez battlez

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137788 me vs. ibraheem
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137782 me vs. amayze

Weak battle, simple wordplay and multis/

Flow: Tie
Wordplay: Tie; weak wordplay though
Punches: SixX
Multis: SixX
Structure: Tie
Metas: SixX
Personals: None
Overall: SixX

Vote= SoxX

He had stronger punches, and he had multis to help them/
Also helpin his whole verse out thas all, good battle/
Keep elevating both of ya/

aight...

Six: shit was decent, nuthin hott...

Strong points- rubben studarrd line, had some creativity, and nice structure.

Flaws- dont talk about christopher reeves that way, have some respect.

Complex: verse had some landed punches.

Stong points- you had a few personals, keep that up.

Flaws- too basic, elevate, its ok...im trying to elevate too.

vote: Sixx

return the favor.

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=137726

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quote your own damn lyrics...

sixx man what happened you was doin good but that closer is what lost it for you im a big eminem fan i know most of his shit inside out and that last line you use em spit it in a battle so sorry as my sig says plagerize and die complex illness dont be strutin like you the shit cuz sixx woulda had this had it not been for that line

v/ sadly complex illness

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THE TRUTH IS I'M BETTER THAN YOU

Fuckin Pussy ass Cheater D.A. aNd SixX da FinIsh Same IP Adress how ya feel ya fuckinb Cheatre

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Im not bad shit....n y ya missin me bastids
Leave nigga's in da past like history-classes

I am not the Sixx man, you can even check my e-mail account you dumb bastard/
dont blame shit if you dont kno anything/

yo sixxverall i think you had da better verse in cludin punches n content,/creativity..
nothin real great in this battle but it was fairly close,complex your verse needed ta have a better ryme scheme n try ta stretch those lines a lil more to get ore complex...alright battle...
vote/sixx
return da favour
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=136831
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...059#post1440059

ayo jus cuz im smokin u dont mean shyt son i aint fuckin cheat i was owt all day yesterday n if u wanna be a dick u should be dq'ed for not droppin or checkin in on time

so fuck u!

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I say Complex cuz he was more witty wit it. return da fav. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137393

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Black Man White(BMW)
No Grudges.

dick rydin ass vote^^ plz kid get ya self checked theres no competition here i killt him. uppin

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