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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
Rascal 5 71.43%
Maku JaiiLiin 2 28.57%
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Old 07-27-04, 11:03 AM   #1
KISI
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Rascal Vs. Maku Jaiiliin

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10lines..
..normal voting..
..you set up..
..YOU SPIT FIRST..
..3-0 Ko..
..3-1 Tko

BY YOUR REQUEST YA VERSE IS DUE BY NINE PM TOMORROW

CHECK IN FIRST.


Win by KO
 
Old 07-27-04, 11:04 AM   #2
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sorry about the you set up part, i copy/pasted his rules and shit, and he said i set it up.
 
Old 07-27-04, 11:09 AM   #3
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nice copy and paste.
i said do dinner time 12 o'clock.
but whatever its GMT anyway.
G'luck and Pz.
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Old 07-28-04, 07:13 PM   #4
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Forget about the win.you shouldn't even bother checkin-in.see the point is..
why do you set your verse up....................for the crowds dissapointment..
Dont run circles round this n00b... it is more like a figure of eight..
My Sig and avy are dope.. when yours are just a pair of self portraits..
this kids late to spit his verse.. probably tryin to find sumone to ghost it..
You gonna pm roun some friends askin for them to come and vote on this.?.
"Iam what you cant be" well i will never be like you.. wack as fuck then..*
People said i would Ko you.. and be honest your verse will prove it to them..
your are your custom.. not fit to hang with this super heavy weight..
verse's were due 3hours back bitch.. atleast i spit a no-show.. sorri and no-hate..

Quick no-show verse..
*His Sig says in the ""..
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Old 07-28-04, 08:04 PM   #5
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Forget about the win.you shouldn't even bother checkin-in.see the point is..
why do you set your verse up....................for the crowds dissapointment..
Dont run circles round this n00b... it is more like a figure of eight..
My Sig and avy are dope.. when yours are just a pair of self portraits..
this kids late to spit his verse.. probably tryin to find sumone to ghost it..
You gonna pm roun some friends askin for them to come and vote on this.?.
"Iam what you cant be" well i will never be like you.. wack as fuck then..*
People said i would Ko you.. and be honest your verse will prove it to them..
your are your custom.. not fit to hang with this super heavy weight..
verse's were due 3hours back bitch.. atleast i spit a no-show.. sorri and no-hate..

The way i outshine you, it's illegal, i drop criminal floss//
I will forget about this easy win, but you'll remember ya loss//
Each time you start a battle line, i'll stop it, and leave you a slain bastard//
so ya verse is full of new deaths like abortion clinic waiste baskets//
Tell me why i'm like this, rascal, what nut could've mothered this sick shit?//
Better question: Who else from england is nice
other than slick rick?//
English emcee? you'll go from the best shitty rapper//
to an oscar award winning, homosexual actor//
It's funny all this disrespect that you got fam//
when you said.
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Originally Posted by Rascal
do you wanna batle?you got good potential and could help me Elevate alot man..
 
Old 07-28-04, 08:08 PM   #6
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The way i outshine you, it's illegal, i drop criminal floss//
I will forget about this easy win, but you'll remember ya loss//
Each time you start a battle line, i'll stop it, and leave you a slain bastard//
so ya verse is full of new deaths like abortion clinic waiste baskets//
Tell me why i'm like this, rascal, what nut could've mothered this sick shit?//
Better question: Who else from england is nice
other than slick rick?//
English emcee? you'll go from the best shitty rapper//
to an oscar award winning, homosexual actor*//
It's funny all this disrespect that you got fam//
when you said.
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do you wanna batle?you got good potential and could help me Elevate alot man..
**

*the fact that every other british, english, or whatever actor is gay.
 
Old 07-28-04, 08:24 PM   #7
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I say Maku real personal return da fav.
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137982
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=138043
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137399
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=137393

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Old 07-29-04, 07:54 PM   #8
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uppin 4 votes on this one, let's keep it movin....
 
Old 07-29-04, 09:18 PM   #9
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my flow is sometimes hard for people to read, because a lot of the time lines may bleed into the next bar, or a line starts sooner than usual. it's not a regular, straight set up, it vomits all over the beat. I should do more audios show an example.
 
Old 07-29-04, 09:45 PM   #11
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MAKU:YOUR PUNCHES N RYME SCHEME WERE way better..some stretched lines but i still dint find it hurt your verse in the end,rascal,your ryming wasway off.good idea's but ya did'nt capitalize on them,overall it was a good battle alot better than i normally see in front lines,,,props ta both mc's....
vote/maku

please return da vote:
http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...059#post1440059

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Old 07-30-04, 08:11 PM   #12
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uppin this battle....thanks for the votes, let's keep it movin.
 
Old 08-01-04, 12:46 AM   #13
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maku good drop but.....not good enough.good personal at the end but punches were lackin and you borderline bitting on that abortion clinic shit.ras good fucking drop your shit was dope official opener and closer hard punches good disses and your only flaw is no personals but your verse was overwelming so you aint need them good drop vote ras
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oh and by the way dont ask to battle everyone on here knows thats your only defence..

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Old 08-01-04, 07:23 AM   #14
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Uppin this it realy does need votes..
Leave a link and i will hit it up for you..
pz.
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Old 08-02-04, 06:19 AM   #15
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rascal had better word play(7)...and his structure was better..he came up with better punches and personals(8)...but the other guy had a gd verse..but not as good as rascals....his structure wasnt gd at all(5)....this battle was ok tho...aand rascal i have seen better drops than this...but keep it up
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