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07-29-04, 08:00 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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Jess Read It & Gimme Sum Feedbac
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Yo I'm Jess Freestylen Wah's On My Mind So Here it Go....................
 I resite des verses lyke dey from out tha bible,An if u got beef lil nigga u know u dead upon arrival shot by a rifle, Plus nigga I got dat tek, I gotta stay equip ta knoc a nigga on his bac, Now dats a fact nigga, An now my life is di-gressin, There's gotta be a way ta let of some of this aggression, Man I got this crome S-N-Wession ful of passion, Ready to knoc any nigga off as long as I'm blastin, S-N-Wession(Smith-N-Wession)
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  LINKS TO MY SONGS: http://www.soundclick.com/Car Shows...id=3438907&q=lo Tha Battle (Tech Skillz Diss 2) Tech Skillz Diss Fuk Tha Rules Last edited by Tha Unknown (Uk) : 07-29-04 at 08:19 AM. |
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07-29-04, 08:09 AM
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...tha princess of rv...
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OK.SUM FEEDBACK....
that verse looks like its for audio. wen u write it u gotta hve a beta structure.... keep line length the same,try get the same amount of syllables in each line/bar I resite des verses lyke dey from out tha bible, An if u got beef lil nigga u know u dead upon arrival shot by a rifle,Plus nigga I got dat tek, I gotta stay equip ta knoc a nigga on his bac now dats a fact nigga,An now my life is di-gressin, There's gotta be a way ta let of some of this aggression, Man I got this crome S-N-Wession ful of passion, Ready to knoc any nigga off as long as I'm blastin ^^like that....u see it has beta flow..is easier to read.
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07-29-04, 08:13 AM
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New to RB
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i liked it homie, think manipulation was right about they way u drop a line but that was good, look forward to seein yah drop a track. ayo thanx for yah ratin on mah 'ending tear' much luv dawg.
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07-29-04, 08:21 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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Yo Thanx all. I'll give yall sum honest feedbac when I see yell drop one too
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07-29-04, 09:00 AM
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Odi et Amo
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Lmao...for minute thought that u were talkin to me (Jess...) but uhm, yea, its kool,keep dropping ur stuff!Nice...
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07-29-04, 09:03 AM
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Welcome 2 Dope South
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Thanx Jess............lol I got chu.......Naw I wasn't jess callin u out
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