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Check in by: 08-03-04 at 12:43 AM

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SONIC has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 12:44 AM.

Triple_N has ACCEPTED this battle on 07-31-04 12:44 AM.

Ah'ight Triple_N bout to do some damage


Da truth is u a net thug, obsessed wit made up ebonics
U changed names cuz real mc's cancel u jus like sonic
Ya lines are unshapely, structure doesn't exist
Wouldn't be shapely wit exercise and diet from nutristionist
U could neva do audio cuz even in text u hit wrong notes
U should drop ya post in a pool cuz there shit floats
U a nobody all the spits in ya lifetime will be typed
Cuz u flow jus like water in dried out water pipes
U try to hide that u bite and set yourself apart
U rv jeeper creeper u don't bite whole lines jus certain parts
U black wit no rhythm, rappin' u jus need to stop
Cuz cornballs like u take the hip out the hop
Bein' fisted u luv it always made u chuckle
But i already knew how much sonic liked knuckles

Thats it!!!!!

I put this bitch on the "front lines" so he can Take First Hits
His Bio says, "Rhymin's my life", Meanin his life Ain't Worth Shit
Why does he Try to Win, U get ripped Time n Time Again
I jus Find The Pen, n lyrically kill u with Ink, like Giant Squids
My Verbs Split Ya, Feel the impact when these Words Hit Ya
The Infamous "triple N", a.k.a, The Newbie, Nerd Nigga
I'll beat U unconcious, With U giving an Extra Effort
U could give me 5 of yo losses n I'd still have a better Record
How dare yo step up, I'll win, let me Increase the Span
Yo Punches are like UFO's.. No one See's them Land
But u claim the be the master?
Well sorry "son", but i'm yo DaD, now you're not a Bastard
And Like "Fishing" I set Mc's up wit bait, only way to Fight em
Coz when I throw out "good lines", niggas like him Bite em
Yo rhymes are delayed, punches played, I refuse Yo Demo
Bounce, for I slap U back far enough for u to win Limbo
I know ur wonderin where's the scope, why do I Spit So Clean
I'm like Freddy Crougars, U can't beat me In Yo Dreams
So next time don't try you'll be sure to Die in Pain
Wit my addictive, good battle, yet like drugs, u Tried "in Vain"

SINCE ICAN'T EDIT..

LINE: 9... SHOULD OF BEEN ...............hOW dARE "YOU" STEP UP

LINE: 11.. AND YOU CLAIM "TO" BE THE MASTER

LAST LINE.. WIT MY ADDICTIVE "FLOW"....

I ALMOST RAN OUT OF TIME AND FORGOT TO PUT THAT.. PEACE.. UPPIN

Voted For: Triple_N

Sonic- Verse Was Nice, Punches Hit Hard, Flow Was On Point, Tho Structure Wasnt As Good... And Didnt Have As Many Personals..... lol at triple newbie nerd nigga.. hahahaa

Triple N - Personals Were Good, Flow Was On Point As Well, Structure as Better, And Punches Hit A Bit Harder... Tho Sonic Beat You With Wordplay And Metas....

Punches- Triple N
Personals- Triple N
Flow- Tie
Wordplay- Sonic
Metaphors- Sonic
Originality- Tie
Structure- Triple N

Final Vote....... Nice Battle Both Of You.. But My Vote Goes To Triple N

Return Favor With Honest Vote: Peep Sigg

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Voted For: SONIC

structure triplen both could use a lil improvement
flow tie
vocab triplen
personals triple barely both could use work here
multis both need work
punches tripl
this was a shitty battle in my opinion lol i know triple didnt try and the other kid came really played but i think triple came more complex and more creative by far stop goin half ass on battles u bitches lmao jk

Vote changed to TripleN... see below

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For the record great battle truth....much respect playa

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tHANX, i APPRECIATE IT.. YOU'RE A GOOD SPORT.. DIDO YO..

i did it wrong i meant to vote 4 triple nad i didnt read th instructions b4 i voted my bad ill tell strob im sorry (walks away feelin really stupid and sorry)

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You can't explain like that next time you come in here either.. that was not an explaination

actually it is i have to say what u did good and what u could work on thats the requirements dont hate cause u didnt get my vote lol

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Voted For: SONIC

Triple_N
Da truth is u a net thug, obsessed wit made up ebonics
U changed names cuz real mc's cancel u jus like sonic
Cancel him?Soft opener
Ya lines are unshapely, structure doesn't exist
Wouldn't be shapely wit exercise and diet from nutristionist
Yeah thats arlight
U could neva do audio cuz even in text u hit wrong notes
U should drop ya post in a pool cuz there shit floats
... below par
U a nobody all the spits in ya lifetime will be typed
Cuz u flow jus like water in dried out water pipes
uGh.. No
U try to hide that u bite and set yourself apart
U rv jeeper creeper u don't bite whole lines jus certain parts
Not bad
U black wit no rhythm, rappin' u jus need to stop
Cuz cornballs like u take the hip out the hop
.... no
Bein' fisted u luv it always made u chuckle
But i already knew how much sonic liked knuckles
LOL!

A few blahza lines, some good ones, closure was hot

Sonic
I put this bitch on the "front lines" so he can Take First Hits
His Bio says, "Rhymin's my life", Meanin his life Ain't Worth Shit
uGh, barely...
Why does he Try to Win, U get ripped Time n Time Again
I jus Find The Pen, n lyrically kill u with Ink, like Giant Squids
Thats ok
My Verbs Split Ya, Feel the impact when these Words Hit Ya
The Infamous "triple N", a.k.a, The Newbie, Nerd Nigga
ROFL!....umm yeah that was ok
I'll beat U unconcious, With U giving an Extra Effort
U could give me 5 of yo losses n I'd still have a better Record
lol it's OK
How dare yo step up, I'll win, let me Increase the Span
Yo Punches are like UFO's.. No one See's them Land
LOL!
But u claim the be the master?
Well sorry "son", but i'm yo DaD, now you're not a Bastard
Umm whats going on here?
And Like "Fishing" I set Mc's up wit bait, only way to Fight em
Coz when I throw out "good lines", niggas like him Bite em
Yeah it's aight, brag line
Yo rhymes are delayed, punches played, I refuse Yo Demo
Bounce, for I slap U back far enough for u to win Limbo
Alright...
I know ur wonderin where's the scope, why do I Spit So Clean
I'm like Freddy Crougars, U can't beat me In Yo Dreams
No
So next time don't try you'll be sure to Die in Pain
Wit my addictive, good battle, yet like drugs, u Tried "in Vain"
Did I read this wrong, or was that written poorly?

Consistent verse fell off near the end, flipped some old concepts (punches/land etc) & had good flow

V/Sonic;Reading the laugho-meter he takes it.If Triple N had match his lines... this would of been different(?)Good read anyway guys

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Voted For: SONIC

NICE.......

This was a close battle to call, but SONIC had more punches, and when it comes down to it, thats how you gotta win...


VOTE: SONIC