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08-04-04, 03:43 AM | #1 | ||
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Cruel Contemplations ft. 2XL
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What are these thoughts circling in my head? Why is my mind filled with fear and dread? Why am I haunted by a dreamer’s curse? Is it true? Could this world turn for the worse? Tell me could our lives be on some crude probation? Just imagine the hurt of these cruel contemplations… Is a nightmare all but a hope's purification? Just feel the hurt of these cruel contemplations... Verse 1: (Ghost Emperor aka Cerulean) Picture if you can feud and disease sweeping unspoiled across lands As allures of wicked power wrap world’s neck with iron hands Imagine little rants and brawls sparking international wars Where wreaking havoc and death are considered rational chores Imagine millions and millions being spent on conflicts and fighting Yet all the time politicians would be claiming to do the right thing Imagine a suffering of the people far away and on our doorstep Where kids are born into poverty, from day one the core’s set Imagine little ones running with guns and putting slugs in each other What would be if the struggle to eat had brothers killing one another? A cruel world where aspirations instate the hater not the lover Can you imagine the rocky path being paved for yet another young mother? Envision if you dare the will to live eclipsing poverty’s tortures Imagine pimps pushing struggling teens on gritty street corners Imagine them used and exposed, they’d be wearing but fake-smiles Just dirt, mini skirts the only thing hugging their slim profiles Damn, imagine crack heads in alleys giving chase to that last high Imagine jaded, belated the world goes by through a glass eye Imagine dealers and cops counting the bills of their exploits And imagine lives being traded for paper to fill in for death’s void Hook x 1 Verse 2: (2XL) Envision the collapse of society, mass destruction on a worldwide scale Where only the strongest survive… to rape and kill the weak and frail No government, army, or police to serve and protect us Starvation: men, women and children flee the cities in mass exodus Envision New York, London, and Tokyo engulfed in flames The type uh shit I’m talking bout would make 9/11 look tame Imagine millions of orphaned and hungry sons and daughters Or pregnant women beaten and gang raped in front of their fathers Imagine warlords dukin it out for control of the streets with automatics Imagine flippin every channel on the TV – and gettin nuttin but static It’d be tragic… but a perfect word to describe it would be humanity A word that often timez iz synonymous with insanity… Pure savagery… the topic I’m addressin ain’t much of a twist Cuz in sum parts of the world today these conditions already exist Imagine the world’s worst criminals assuming power Imagine starvation so bad… that human corpses were devoured Imagine the return of diseases like bubonic plague and leprosy Sumtimez it seemz that destruction iz the human race’s only destiny Imagine mass murderers let out the prisons and becomin politicians Imagine… shit, is this type of world really all that hard to envision? 2XL: Hey, hey, hold up the track a minute... Ghost Emperor: Hold up! Yo XL, isn’t all that what the world’s already like…? Damn…
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats Last edited by Cerulean : 08-04-04 at 06:25 AM. |
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08-04-04, 04:15 AM | #2 | |
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wasnt feelin it your structure was off
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08-04-04, 06:22 AM | #3 | ||
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thanks. any more feedback?
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats |
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08-04-04, 07:35 AM | #4 | |
fuck da hataz B.A.M 4 life
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liked ur choice of words good story i liked it thanx 4 ur feedback in my new post jus returnin da love holla back
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08-04-04, 01:51 PM | #5 | ||
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thanks dude. upping for more feedback! ^^^^^^^
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats |
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08-05-04, 01:23 AM | #6 | ||
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uppin 2! just let me know how i can improve and shit...
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats |
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08-05-04, 05:18 AM | #7 | ||
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uppin 3
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats |
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08-05-04, 04:17 PM | #8 | ||
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uppin 4... please give me some feedback so i can elevate! i'll return the favour
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats |
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08-05-04, 04:29 PM | #9 | |
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a good story but let me drop this righ there
drink wines but like stink swines on route with my snout To root up trees and boot corrupt MC’S with bad clout out The game., search much to find rhymes and loose money Being broke produce funny vibes hate crummy scribes sonny |
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08-06-04, 10:28 AM | #10 | ||
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^huh? glad you liked my drop but those lines had me kind of confused. sound good but don't really make any sense!
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats |
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08-07-04, 05:19 AM | #11 | ||
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uppin for more feedback
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats |
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08-07-04, 07:02 PM | #12 | ||
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was aight....structure was off....could be alot better...u should go through and fix some things
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08-08-04, 05:23 AM | #13 | ||
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iight thanks for the feedback!
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats |
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08-08-04, 05:44 AM | #14 | ||
Banned: Cheating
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shit i thought the shit was koo to tell u da truth it was all good strcutre was iite,but ey yo hit up me n Raw Killa's collabos, iite 1 love
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08-08-04, 06:49 AM | #15 | ||
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yeah thanks yo, i'm working to improve my structure already. i checked your shit out as well and it was hot, definitely feeling that! peace
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People take my word even when I sound kind of absurd But one senses nonsense when my two cents get heard Rhythms Want free beats? Check out Anno Domini Beats |
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