Battle Rules:

4 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No feeding

other than that thats it lets get this poppin im droppin first

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Check in by: 08-14-04 at 04:31 PM

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Damage Control has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 04:31 PM.

Lil Rip has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-11-04 04:32 PM.

i'm down you spit first

Call me a surgeon the way i got this kid sedated,
Battle me? you must be crazy youd do better blind datin
its your style im hatin, and your heart im about to crush,
how you could you challenge when compared all u r is dust
my skills are good-trust,like a deathrow inmate this ya last-meal,the only way others feel you is if you make em cop-a-cheap-feel//
thats right this battle is already a done deal, answered your open callout and all you've done is kneel//
fuck rap im this kids closet nightmare, after this you should start surfing and grow some bushy hair//
how could you dare to challenge someone ten times better?
defeat me? you got as good chance opening a million dollar letter//
call me the hot knife as im slicing this kids cheddar, stop rapping, your better off typing up newsletters//
this kids ideas are like money and obviously hes gone broke,
i can see him now dying because of my bars that made him choke//

aight post yours and lets get this poppin

damn you gonna drop or what? stop reciting your lines to yourself and drop its been almost 2 hours

yo can someone dq this kid he hasnt been on all day i basically wasted lines on em?

yo yo
he's the tpye of nigga that fucks cabage pacth dolls//
and the only Hoes he's pimpin are the holes( hoes ) in his wall//
with no balls punk bitch pray i'll be nicer//
bitch talk mo shit than baby put out in diapers//
you don't want none cuz, i'm the comeback king, that a fact//
cuz my cum is n the back of your throat now swallow that//so bith be quit b 4 you get fuck//
i woud put somthing in ya mouth to shut you up but damn my zipper stuck//

yo uppin for votes nice to see you FINALLY SPIT lets get those votes poppin -1-

Voted For: Damage Control

blllllllllllllllaaaaaaaahhhhhh

lil rips drop was straight weak and played way too
much seriously you need to get original with your ideas

damage control at least had a sort of original and
decent drop so thats goooooooooodddddddddddd

vote: dc

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yo vote on this with a fair honest vote and it will be returned by us dont sleep on this one uppin for votes

Voted For: Damage Control

yo i think dis goes to damage control, he had betat strcutre altho his punches cud get betta i think he took dis, um lil rip i liked yovers en evrythin but u need wordplay and vocab n shit man but u did have sum good punches, um iite good battle

v/Damage Control

yo both of yall return da favor

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Voted For: Damage Control

you both suck but damage control has my vote cuz his was longer and harder.
lil rip you had sucky structuer and wasnt long so i vote for damage control.

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Voted For: Lil Rip

the other guy i wasnt feelin it he was talkin to much shit

Voted For: Damage Control

aight both of these werent very good but id have to say damage control won he had more metaphors if you can even call them that anyways both need to elevate