Battle Rules:

6 - 20 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
no h8 votes

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 08-17-04 at 12:07 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Maku JaiiLiin has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 12:16 PM.

Soulless has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-14-04 12:35 PM.

** I didn’t think we were havin a 12 hour deadline…. But w/e

**PLEASE DON’T drop a novel just match mine…8 lines**

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Explanations--
*Hes got GOTHIC shit in his sig… they usually dress in all black
** the pictures in his sig have eye liner on…
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You ‘can’t fight‘… when ya ass has to ‘struggle for life,’
So Gothic.. I made u disappear when I ‘turned out the lights‘!!!!! *
I could rip you on personals… but Mak truthfully… nobody-cares..
Thinking of sendin u to hell… but ya sig, looks like ya already-there!!!!*
You say -stuff, your online so much… ya whole life is made-up,
U might win… cuz I don’t ‘punch’ grls.. Or guys who wear make-up!!!!!**
Gothic’s and rap don’t mix…. Com’on man lets just get-real…
Cuz ya getting no where quick, like ‘runnin for ya life’ on a treadmill!!!

Sonned!!!

this is stop and go style format, so there is pauses in between sentences, not long ones, but you'll catch on.

Chance lines with enhanced minds? i wrote rap's rule booklet//
and in a matter of a half a line you'll say

Quote:

Originally Posted by Soulless Maku took it..

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i'm taking this cat//
with serated blades, placed to his navel and back//
"Say my greatness is statement of fact."//
the tek'll have thoughts escapin ya mind//
battle, i'll treat you laced chemicals in coc, have you waitin in line//
thanks for the props and your vote//
but i'll still have you sweatin like frosty in a sauna while rockin a fur coat//
....yer verse is sounding played in a sentence//
cuz I'm too tight to fuck with,
...like anal penetration of infants//
I wrote an iller verse when i was slayin this lame//
but i treated it like monica's dress, and saved it for fame//
ya team need reality//
so wit ease i'll have Soulles sleepin with fishes,
.....like marine bestiality//
Practice from virginia snipings, gave me my aim//
but my spirit consumptional techniques, gave you ya name//

i didn't spend time thinking of this verse, it was done in under an hour,
if you are familiar with my battles, it would only take me an hour and stuff, i was just waiting to post it, cuz i had so much time to do so.
the last line is one against his name, soulless

anyway the line in quotes, is a 'use it against him' type diss, because he gave me the vote on one of my battles.

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this is stop and go style format, so there is pauses in between sentences, not long ones, but you'll catch on.

Chance lines with enhanced minds? i wrote rap's rule booklet//
and in a matter of a half a line you'll say
*
i'm taking this cat//
with serated blades, placed to his navel and back//
"Say my greatness is statement of fact."//
the tek'll have thoughts escapin ya mind//
battle, i'll treat you laced chemicals in coc, have you waitin in line//
thanks for the props and your vote//
but i'll still have you sweatin like frosty in a sauna while rockin a fur coat//
....yer verse is sounding played in a sentence//
cuz I'm too tight to fuck with,
...like anal penetration of infants//
I wrote an iller verse when i was slayin this lame//
but i treated it like monica's dress, and saved it for fame//
ya team need reality//
so wit ease i'll have Soulles sleepin with fishes,
.....like marine bestiality//
Practice from virginia snipings, gave me my aim//
but my spirit consumptional techniques, gave you ya name//

i didn't spend time thinking of this verse, it was done in under an hour,
if you are familiar with my battles, it would only take me an hour and stuff, i was just waiting to post it, cuz i had so much time to do so.
the last line is one against his name, soulless

anyway the line in quotes, is a 'use it against him' type diss, because he gave me the vote on one of my battles.

the treadmill no where quick line has been used...
i've heard it before, a couple times.

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tight battle both of you

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why did u post twice.?...

and please dont say my lines are plyed just to sway votes...

in actually nothin really rhymed in your whole verse... shti was mad wack... but i wasn't gunna say anything....


aihgt uppin for votes

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@soulless:bitch, how you gon say, i said that to sway votes and now you hatin? TO SWAY VOTES. Let the voters decide, until then...

son ya self.

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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

i'm taking this cat//
with serated blades, placed to his navel and back//
"Say my greatness is statement of fact."//
the tek'll have thoughts escapin ya mind//
battle, i'll treat you laced chemicals in coc, have you waitin in line//
thanks for the props and your vote//
but i'll still have you sweatin like frosty in a sauna while rockin a fur coat//
....yer verse is sounding played in a sentence//
cuz I'm too tight to fuck with,
...like anal penetration of infants//
I wrote an iller verse when i was slayin this lame//
but i treated it like monica's dress, and saved it for fame//
ya team need reality//
so wit ease i'll have Soulles sleepin with fishes,
.....like marine bestiality//
Practice from virginia snipings, gave me my aim//
but my spirit consumptional techniques, gave you ya name//

Punches=8
Meta's=7
Personals=6
Complexity=7
Open/Close=7

You ‘can’t fight‘… when ya ass has to ‘struggle for life,’
So Gothic.. I made u disappear when I ‘turned out the lights‘!!!!! *
I could rip you on personals… but Mak truthfully… nobody-cares..
Thinking of sendin u to hell… but ya sig, looks like ya already-there!!!!*
You say -stuff, your online so much… ya whole life is made-up,
U might win… cuz I don’t ‘punch’ grls.. Or guys who wear make-up!!!!!**
Gothic’s and rap don’t mix…. Com’on man lets just get-real…
Cuz ya getting no where quick, like ‘runnin for ya life’ on a treadmill!!!

Punches=6
Meta's=6
Personals=6
Complexity=7
Open/Close=6

Came down 2 better punches and overall better wordplay
this battle was ok but both could use a lil more harder punches

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uppin 4 votes on this one.........................

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Voted For: Maku JaiiLiin

Not Feeling The Structure of Maku but Your Style Is Pretty Hot...

Nice Punches and Creativity Threwout Your Verse Kid...

Maku Took This With Better Wordusuage, Creativity, and Punches.

Vote - Maku

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uppin on this one.................................

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