yo im sick of dis bitch talkin,well its time for the best to come out and lets go

verse 1
(slow)
i send faggots just like u to the vetnarion
how u gone want beef wen u a vegitarion
pussys talk, dis bitch should walk
cause im aimin and i reload ma hawk
i hate beef wit kids wit no talent to rock
and i see u tryin to scheme,get off ma cock
how u gone beg for co-leader then act hard
one night in da dessert i'll leave u bloody and scarred
im the type that dont take a diss lightly
and im the type to shake bitches nightly
personal dis and crew blowouts
so give ya last calls and shout outs
hate dem fags like u need to get off the block
cause bitch like u stay on that cock

hook
bitch u dont want beef
u dont wanna start that beef
u cant handle dat bitch
admit u dotn beef wit me
and get left head cutof in vip

well this was better then para diss then again i dont remeber who he was dissing lmao but none the less u had a decenty flow preety much basic stuff every-line there wasnt much creativeness shown at all, but there was flow and basic hits and diss which turn out to be ok...

5-outta 10.... average verse....

um,thanx uppin

Yo Dawg Leave A Link To Were You Replied Before...... In Someones Elses Open Mic Or This Will Be Closed.

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RB Text Tourney Finalist
Orginal Relaunched Member.
Password Aka The Masked
2nd Moderator on Rapverse Ever
Not quite legendary yet....

Thanks.

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S-Own Squod
RB Text Tourney Finalist
Orginal Relaunched Member.
Password Aka The Masked
2nd Moderator on Rapverse Ever
Not quite legendary yet....

k im gettin pissed fuck off you loser ill make one rank now

k are you gay or somthin like realy who says get off my cock in a diss and who changes the story to fuckin gurls lol honest this is what i give you yer other one was better 3/10

*0/10
fairly whack shit, you put ya self out there to be judged, and that was some whack shit. Elevate or stop altogether. Don't like what i said, then battle me.

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it wasnt nothin special, average at best, you need to up your vocab and spellin, i aint seen the other dudes diss so i dont know how this compares. but all in all its a 5.5/10

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-Young Buck

you need to elevate with your vocab.try using more wordplay and personals,4/10.

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Fuck alla yall haters

Never mind what I think home boy,,,,Its up to you if you think its nice,,,
If you dont believe in your self ,,,who will?
Im just here to tell you nice drop,,,an keep em comming,,, God bless all,,,1

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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none

are beef is over man