Yo i thought this site was a fuckin battle site where cats come from all over to perfect they artform?


If you wanna get some or show ya booty
Yall can complain all ya but you aint gon' move me/
Yall tryin to find a spouse go to a love site-
Round here real niggas lookin for them glove fights/
Some cats postin pics of hoes they aint got
Im perfecting the flow for the dough I aint got/
This is not a diss-this is just my perspective
So if you tryin to get paid i suggest you change ya directive/
This is the start of a collective Niggas Tryin to Succeed
Cus basically yall gonna be the Niggas With no Need
of a deal cus yall aint focused thats just the facts
you can say fuck the wax but soon its gonna come back at ya
and I'ma be there on top staring down at ya

Bang

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

nice shit


THIS IS NOT FEED BACK "NICE SHIT" IS NOT FEEDBACK LEAVE FEEDBACK ruff i'm warrning you.

- Mask.

Keep elevating Pz.

Oh yeah leave a link to were you replied to bro.. leave the link here.

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RB Text Tourney Finalist
Orginal Relaunched Member.
Password Aka The Masked
2nd Moderator on Rapverse Ever
Not quite legendary yet....

Like Jigga said "its just my thoughts" . Although there aint no comparison now but thats where im trying to be feel me?

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=142443

this what you talkin bout man?

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

Can i get some feedback on this shit.

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

Lookin for that feedback foreal man.

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

Yo I need feedback im addicted to this shit.

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

I liked the use of repetition in "I ain't got"


hackneyed topic...and your imagery wasn't strong enough to rehash a commn theme

decent rhyming...just up complexity


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word word aight. upppin for more feedback.

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"You know I own the steal
Everything aint jabs and hooks and you aint Holyfield"

"We respected Highly -Cus You aint gotta practice gymnastics to catch a body"

that shit was cool but with a name like bang come harder my nigga but all love.....1

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hey yo im known to play it low//
dont confuse me with these cornballs on the radio//


ima true hustlah you couldnt fit in my shoes//
my pager buzz to much man my hips are bruised//

faMBa$e Bitch ass niggas Bean Town thats how im doing it....enjoy life make money.....death b4 dishonor
trust no body that aint your fam and fuck that you cant even trust them some times i cant even trust myself lil niggas.....1