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Check in by: 08-20-04 at 12:25 AM

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SLY LOC'S has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-19-04 11:56 PM.

DiZeE has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-20-04 12:04 AM.

A Ho Im To Sick When I Spit Thes Words U Qick To Back Down When It Cumz 2 These Flows. Thats Y U Suck Dick 4 A Buck An U In Luck Im Going Easie On U Cuz. I Wount Stop Flowin Untill Ur Dead.so Back To Tha Slaughter Dizee Is Tha Name Ive Ground To Hate Whita Passion Tearing Up Is Lick A Fashion In Just Here To Get My Rashion Or Porion So Here It Is Im Taking U To Wars Son. Cuz Im Like Neo Im Just Tha One To Take U Out Whitout A Doudt So Im Coinning To Tha End So Fuck Have Anice Night And Goodbye

Now who the this i smelt some fish
looked in your direction an spotted a bitch
just a another homo who tried to switch //
so sly locz sounds like a hard name
u probably hard to reconize game
cuz you would of never stepped in this direction
let the 12 gadge pump slide down you throat like a bitch so you can learn your lesson
look in the direction of the 831 and find
that bitches like you just waste time another breath another line ...... "now here comes the fun part"
Sly loc's cut off your head and spit it down your throat
walk wit yourgutz in my trench coat
skin you like a goat
built you a moat wit a sighn that sayz
"dont rot .. i hope"
split your brain, for fun not for fame, but to scratch a bitch out the game,who spitz like they bang or clam,is you insaine ?
cuz you just got your bell rang

Voted For: DiZeE

YOU GOT IT HOE
DONT TAKE IT TO THA HEAD CUS ILL LEAVE YOU BRAIN DEAD AND IM WINNIG

ok bitch tha gloves are off i think is time to kick this shit raw dizee u a fag go and bye your fatass a bar u to fat to pimp any hoes an nick no homo i think its time to go go back to mex u lucky i dont roll u up and smoke u hoe so lay down and die. hay nick find your own shit dont slill shit from bratha lynch b4 u get lynched bick

Voted For: DiZeE

Opener - Dizee, Sly-Elevate
Closer - Dizee, '' ''
Punches - Neither, both were weak
Personals - Nether had any
multies - Sly, I was feelin his better
metas - Sly, dizzys were weak, work on better ones
structure - Dizee, Sly's was horrible-elevate
vocab - neither, both were sad

Overall Dizee took this one with slightly better punches although both were weak. Sly...Elevate on structure, vocab, punches and personals. Dizee took this because he had way better structure, and good opener/closer.

Please leave me an honest vote/feed as I have done for you both...

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Voted For: DiZeE

DAMN!!! he came at sly's neck hard he got tha nice flow bangin ryhmes n hard comin punchlines its obviouse whu won dis battle
vote=Dizee

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Voted For: DiZeE

this battle was kinda lopsided to start off.......niether battler came with anything correct......wordplay and vocab lacked.....
dizee pretty much took all categories.....i wasnt really feelin sly locs flow.....i felt dizee's verse more and in my opinion i felt he came harder.....
My Vote-DiZeE

Voted For: DiZeE

yo you had bad flow but you had more wordplay and better punches...
sly you needa work on your structure cuz i could understand but i read it and you need elevation...

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