Yo heres my first open mic and i would like some honest feedback.. its a collab wit me my bro and my unks gurl
ill put tha rest in some otha time this is my first verse and my unks gurlz(nina) verse tell me wat u think


(ME)
Now spread tha word
I got them bricks on dem dead end streetz
And watch them jump out boyz
Cuz they rollin 10 deep// creep crawlin tha night
Yall no tha deal// on tha muffuckin hill
We all strapped to kill
Chill hittin licks in tha mud
It never ceases
Mad cuz they askin me for 3 dollar pieces
How tha fuck im sposed to come up
Off a shife move/ run up on a twenty and get ur ass an ice cube
It aint nuttin y u bumpin in ur cutlass
Just understand tha ruffness
Never cut for da gutless
Cause its do or die// u ask who am I
An A-town heartbreaker ever since jr high
Eye of tha public
Tha black be a suspect
So tha streetz taught me to be loveless
Causin ruckus in a dope feind bucket
My 2 favorite subjects duck its and fuck its

ChorusME)
Tha night shift// young hustlas workin grave yards
My nine be// beside me// tonite we// work tha nite shift

(NINA)
Its yo midnight mistress//playa name pimptress
I keep it krunk handle up my business
Queen of tha dick// fiend for my shit
Im sumthin korrupt
16 in my clip bout to blow up
Puff black and milds
U cant cramp my style
Playa hatin bitches make me crack a smile
Tonite we worldwide// my nina nigga sounds like tha fourth of july
,uthafuckas die
Daddy streetz wanna marry ya// then bury ya
Nina Ross Mary jane Ms. Cocaine, the 3 devils daughters deep in tha dope game
Tru G’s don’t change// close range left ya boy wit no brainz
Street zombies// takin out possies
Dangerous hobbies just stop me

ChorusNINA)
Tha night shift// young hustlas workin grave yards
My nine be// beside me// tonite we// work tha nite shift

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its aight keep going at it, nice flow and word play.

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thanx letme get mo feedbak

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Um ya new so it's expected of ya not to have much knoledge of the text game but keep at it and u'll elevate keep it up

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To Be Honest...I Don't Know Why I Bothered

man thanx but wat u mean text dogg i freestyle i usually dont rite but uppin gimme some feedback

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