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Old 08-25-04, 01:32 PM   #1
TURBAN
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lose what you had won

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here i am alone, and i wish i had you ,
but your , so far away , i wish i had a chance to undo,
what happened,
i wish i could take your hand and lead you to saftey ,
to my arms,
when you tell me you have no one ,
well you have someone ,
i'll help you get through all those times you never thought would happen,
i'll give you a second breath,
and if i have to -i'll save you,
all i want to say is you mean more to me than anyone,
and everyone cant understand this,i wont expect them to
its just a practice of one, so i'll wait for you to come around,
i understand your in love with someone else,
i just dont want it to be true,
i'll give u this letter and hope it gets to you in time,
but if it dosent please dont read it ,
because it will only throw things off spin,
and my judgement was swayed by the pure emotion i felt at the time,
o all i want is someone who understands,
i'll take your picture and hold it in my hand,
i'll place it in the front pocket of my favorite shirt,
you will forever have had an effect on me,
but no matter what , i promise to stand by you, to prove ,
i never wanted more


*this again is another song by my band INyAKI

peace out
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Old 08-25-04, 10:15 PM   #2
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wow, very strong poem, it kinda makes me want to cry, very emotional as well, i feel you on this shit man.........nice job
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Old 09-04-04, 03:31 PM   #3
TURBAN
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thanks, still uppin....
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Old 09-04-04, 04:15 PM   #4
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nice poem yo...
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Old 09-09-04, 07:18 PM   #5
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wow i wish i was the specail gurl! If i waz that shit would make me cry. Good job and keep it up!
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