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Old 08-27-04, 02:38 AM   #1
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Angry SpeaKiN fA dElF...

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Queenz-bred duke...Dominican..born to do-this/
..as a youngen..
I probly stuck ya local jewelers//
U-know-the-game... the pistol in-da-waist for livin/
8 in da pocketz...
& crackfiendz floored & shiv'rin//
A project kid.. a low-life, wit nothin to live/
abandon'd by Pops...
down-to-stik a knife in ya ribz//
I slept wit whores... strip'd em on the 15th floor...
showed em my length/
and bent 'em with amazin strength//
But-now-that-Im-older... I wish I wouldve done-thingz-different/
LORD forgive me..
for wretchedness & sinful livin//
Im takin the blame...cuz everything I done is-in-vain/
and worst of all...
I grieved YOU & YOUR Merciful Name...................................///
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Old 08-28-04, 02:07 AM   #2
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wack elevation...
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Old 08-28-04, 07:42 AM   #3
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yeah...I didnt like this one neither... ahhh
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Old 08-28-04, 08:04 AM   #4
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straight, coulda been more... but I felt wat u was tryna get at.... keep it up and put more into it, maybe more quantity, more quality, and more heart
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