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Old 09-01-04, 10:42 PM   #1
Sultan
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Another shot at it...
Down here, everyone's in a panic//
Cuz Francis is runnin' rampid...Got Dammit//
I can't chill in my hammock//
Reflectin' upon the damage//
I'd say an awkward eye cuts deep//
Deeper than niggas with heat//
Four gashes drawn on a cheek//
That's ventilation//
And I garuntee a Nigga will approach//
Just for Sultan to decloak the roach//
Lyrics evoke quotes out the throat//
Nope..........I will not falter//
Somebody's gonna run to the alter//
Forgive me Father//
These niggaz tryin' curse my future daughters//
Heads gassed like air balloons//
Yet, blinded by decending doom//
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Old 09-01-04, 10:44 PM   #2
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needs work but rhymes were hot...
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Old 09-02-04, 12:05 PM   #3
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nice homie... yo, ya flow is get'n sick... keep it up
what these cats dont know, is that they are really going to see our names... fa shiggady
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Old 09-02-04, 03:16 PM   #4
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it was iite , it needs some work , but keep ur thang
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