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Check in by: 09-03-04 at 09:14 PM

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lyricalflowz has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-04 08:44 PM.

Eclipsik has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-03-04 08:46 PM.

No accicent, these be intentional blows
Bedwettin' is the only way that "lyricalflows"
Everywhere you go, you gon' have fear when you go
He small time,that's why he need miricale grow
Inject the poision, it was snake eyes that you rolled
"Dice'n" the nose,ten shovin' pipes in the nose
Trite with ya name, you not much like loose change
If you had it to begin I'd make you lose fame
Dudes lame, drop 'em like a scared bitch with bags
I mean you, yeah I heard he want to switch to drag(queen)
Before you even drop your verse it need to hit the trash
He water, and I just pulled the drain in the bath

Voted For: lyricalflowz

Eclipsik:

No accicent, these be intentional blows
Bedwettin' is the only way that "lyricalflows"
well it connected but this was a played
bar to tell you the truth and no personal 5/10
Everywhere you go, you gon' have fear when you go
He small time,that's why he need miricale grow
hmmm? well this was a basic line in my opinion
also played because growing...wow we all grow 4/10
Inject the poision, it was snake eyes that you rolled
"Dice'n" the nose,ten shovin' pipes in the nose
ooook umm kinda odd punch 4.5/10
Trite with ya name, you not much like loose change
If you had it to begin I'd make you lose fame
ummm well basic again and played 4/10
Dudes lame, drop 'em like a scared bitch with bags
I mean you, yeah I heard he want to switch to drag
was a tad funny but it didn't connect 5.5/10
Before you even drop your verse it need to hit the trash
He water, and I just pulled the drain in the bath
blah....weak 3/10


lyricalflowz

When i enter a battle, you already know i straight spit "sik" shit,
You shouldn't even post, cuz everything you say, i'll "Eclipse" it
nice line and wordplay and personal 7/10
When i rhyme I'll leave ya physically dead, and your soul will be gone,
your like "carpet" cuz your "soft" and your always getting "Stepped on"
2nd line was a little played but it was funny 6.5/10
When My punches connect they'll leave a "permenant mark" like "sharpie"
Your not hard, you proved your emotional, so maybe thats why your "Sorry"
aight personal thats dope but basic 6/10
My rhymes are contagious and dangerously bad for your lyrical health,
you want an easy win? then you should set up a battle agaisnt yourself,
lmao pretty good 7/10
you should be like "usher" and admit your whack, cuz thats a true "Confession"
he'd pay me "50 cents" an hour 2 teach him 2 battle, & answer his "21 questions"
aight wordplay on a album and song.....6.5/10
Your moms is on my "respected list" its just to bad that your not bro,
I mean "cum" on she did something u cant do she actually "touched my flow"
AHHH played 6/10
Im like a current in a ocean ill make sure my "flow" makes sure ur boat dont float,
ur invisible to cats on this site, thats why u had to create a thread to get a vote,
ahhh nice closer it was dope and a great personal 8/10

add up scores and realize flow took it in my opinion

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Voted For: lyricalflowz

I dont even think Eclipsik tried.

Lyrical flow had like however many lines he had more punches. Both flows were pretty straight, eclipsik might of even been a lil better. He just lacked punches, and lyricalflowz had all kinds of smilies and shit in there also. Not really any multies from either of ya, and metas were close to even(with lyricalflowz being harder)

Sorry Eclipsik he was just all around better than you elevate a lil more cuz.

Voted For: lyricalflowz

eclipsik no good punches or disses here but a dope flow and wordplay i know your nice on a beat but in text you need harder punches yours were real weak here no hate a 4/10
lyrical shit is a little streched here good opener personal second bar was corny but it was funny lol i liked the link that was funny too good wordplay on the songs diss mom jokes are played but the flow shit was funny good ender personal basically you won with better punches and disses even though eclipsik had a dope flow he slacked too hard on punchec a 6.5/10

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Voted For: lyricalflowz

lyricalflows wins

much more complex
his wasn't prediectalbe-and better punches

ecplipsik was nice too-
mostly jus the basic rhyme sceme that killed ya

good battle tho

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Voted For: Eclipsik

u take this with better flow, punches and personals...the other cats punches were wack as fuck...no offense...creative tho...but they just werent hard...u had good word use, a couple multies...and ya structure was also good...so E gets my vote...it was just overall better...

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Voted For: lyricalflowz

yo i think this goes to lyrikcal he had good punches it wud of been alot more better and secured da win if u wuda made yo verse shorter n to da point man nice n quick, but this was close u had it rite to the point and u dint play round, u had him wit the he'd pay me "50 cents" an hour 2 teach him 2 battle, & answer his "21 questions" that was raw son eclip dawg u had yo verse short witch was koo but some of the things u sed did not make no god dam sense but keep worin on it dawg

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