P.S.A. Tourney
Empire (seed #8-PSA)
vs.
For$aken (seed #9-AI)

Battle Rules:

10 - 15
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 09-07-04 at 11:10 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

For$akeN has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 12:24 AM.

Empire has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-05-04 12:34 AM.

Need 'elevation' you been 'FORSAKEN' when talent was manifested
Verbal weopons 'pressing' my 'suggestion' that you run for the exit
No 'limping' but you can tell im 'pimping' watch what i do to this whore
'Manhandle ya' 'damage ya' you from 'canada'?...aint no rappers in 204(1)
What it 'meant to me' you know my 'alter identitys' you damn groupie
Cant 'stand' you not a 'man' got to sneak into R-rated movies(2)
Not in lyrical 'fitness' you couldnt be 'lifted' if you wrote on blunt papers
Ya'll get a 'loss' you the 'force'? watch as i son you like DARTH VADER(3)
Dumb hater need 'links' cant 'think' of a decent punchline
Lay the pimpslap on 'hos' its bout to be '5-0' like one time(4)







EXPLANATIONS-
1)204 is his area code aint no rappers from no 204
2)hes only fourteen he aint no man he cant even get into r-rated movies yet
3)in STAR WARS luke skywalker is the FORCE and but in last episode he finds out DARTH VADER is his father
4)5-0 represents the votes and one time is police but so aint 5-0 a little wordplay

Voted For: For$akeN

Nice Spit

Empire u dumbass u say no rappers in 204... lol im from 204.... lopts of people here are from 204...

oops... supposed to be feedback... ill PM strobe

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Just check'n things out.. .

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gud battle ppl stay up.....o i think forsaken edged this.....anyways nice battle

Voted For: Empire

Uh, Okay....

LMAO @ THE PICTURE An The Personal Side Of FORSAKENS Verse...
But.......................

EMPIRE Had Better Wordplays, Metas, Punches An Structure...

Forsaken Ya Personal Side Of The Rhyme Was Nice But Ya Need'a Step Ya Game Up, Elevate Ya Vocab n Punches...

EMPIRE Got My Vote

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Voted For: For$akeN

heres the break down

opener:forsaken
punches:forsaken
flow:both
structure:empire
wordplay:none
meta's:empire
personals:forsaken(killed him in that)
humor:forsaken
closer:forsaken
overall:Forsaken


no hate just fact........

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Voted For: For$akeN

forsaken- lol funny verse the opener is funny but i think thats a fuse box the blind line was nice to but i still think u should get more wordplay in your verses bunch of personals in this battle though funny 1s to others where kinda weak like the phone i didnt like to much overall though a pretty nice verse just dissin his pic

empire- vocab started off good then u kinda went away from it personals where average u had a lot of internal rhymes though that kept a tight flow but i think ya punchs lacked here your wordplay was ight didnt have much of it again u should add that to your verse more u had less lines to spit an i still dont think u had that good of averse and u even fed off his when u put that link line in there your closer could have been nice but worded wrong overall work on wordplay and wording your punchs to hit harder everything else is ight

vote forsaken for an overall better verse

no hate an return an HONEST FUCKIN VOTE

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^ even after it says if u dont understand dont vote


some people that are mods on here

you are so dumb i cant feed i cant see forsakens verse stupid in the new system i knew the lame would do that anyways uppppppppppppppppin 2 hater votes for forsaken 2 of my enemys

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looks like a picture frame to me at least:S blah uppppppping

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Blah...
just feedback
Empire had too much explination but yah i gotta say you have been improving by a lil( want a rematch??)
Forsaken gets this battle in my eyes seeing he had a better and stronger verse with better punches and personals

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