yo im the next elvis/throwing shot a ya pelvis/ im another whit kid doing black music/and im still just as gangster so don't abuse it/ cuz i wont hesitate to put a slug in ya/on't come runnin up unless you got thug in ya/ cuz i don't care if you don't like my flo and it bugin ya/now im gon release this info im ready to battle any one/ ill a rattle any one catch and sattle any one/ride you to victory im not well i got a sic story/ not afraid to do shit ill spit fire at you/ ya now my empire phat to/ would you say im crazy or am i insane/w ill i kill or stand outside in a hurricane/ when i gon wacko will i refrain led. and if i don't you dead aiight/ your biggest fear and if tha bed bugs bite now/ it if you should stop tha fight now.

Yo you doing your dizzle my nizzle,,welcome to the site,,,
practice makes perfect
but none of us are that so I guess it makes us good enough to do what we want,
I see you got heart an thats all any mc needs to grow,,so keep on pushing
nice work,,,stay consistant an you'll be all you ever wanted be


Heres a link to my drop feed back is viser verser

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=147764

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My level of battle
is your problem.
Not minds.
So dont toss me
till to you tried me.
This is my ring.
You cant box me.
I'll drop rocky.
I've climbed the mountain's
Making all contenders obsolete.
All you bitches is running like
water fountain
knocking me!!

Defeat list
Young Beezy
out come:5-o
Lost Battles:none
out come
none