who knew that u could mean this much
and that i would miss that special touch
so now i'm fuckin bored with nuthin to do
so i have to jus sit back and think about u
u standing there with a beautful white smile
u sayin ''i love ya'' made my heart beat miss for awhile
i was searchin the web not knowin it could change my life
meet a guy i was hopin Kali Nicole Grove, thats right ur wife
thats just had to turn for the worest
going for 3 days and our love was curest
i'm 14 and in 19 days u'll be 19
to me it was nothin 4 years inbetween
to the law it was rape and u couldn't go to jail
so should i sit back and jus say ''OH WELL''?
age is jus a number and i really love u
why should the police control my life and say what i can do
to me i think we gave the cops to much power
who the hell gave them the right and empower
i think i know that i'm running my life right
so why should a guy get arested when he says ''love ya good-night''
why can't people jus step back, i might be 14 but i got a mind of my own
and no one is going to stop me from calling my guy on the phone!

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So what chicks can rap too/
you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/

Respect List:
AKA (down, and keepin it real)
KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words)
The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol
Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping)
Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em')
phatom (he jus got skill)
LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life)
fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat)

wow, that was well hot haha , but i was feelin it , ya age is jus a numba, but i wouldnt go anything below 2 years younger than me , but no hate thats jus me, keep droppin feelin it peace

Yo I thought it was good and I really liked it...The only thing I can say is put more emotions into ya poem and u will be alright...

so... i think it was good... i remember u tellin me bout this the other day... c i can remember things that i want 2... and some that i dont lol.. well i'll c u at school

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i am always boredsopeople pleezePMmeorIMmeonAIM

nice

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Im A Throwback

ay nice drop...had good emotion...and i got a friend goin thru somethin similar...she is 15 and her man is 19...crazy...but if u got feelins fa em then do what you feel...keep da drops comin...return da favor...peace 1

i think it was wack...i said it...

BE NICE!!!,if you say something is "wack"tell the person why, and what they could have done better...

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^^^^
i second that

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i was really feelin this peice it conveyed a good message and i was from the heart....u have some talent...i can help someone like u....p.m me if your interested