she doesn't understand
how much i need her
back in my life
i can't go just bein best friends
i lover her more than that
and i gotta let her know
can't do it anymore
can't keep my emotions inside
no longer keep em bottled up
gotta let em all out
i need you so much
i want you back in my life
i love you girl, no longer
can i sleep at night
baby i need you
i need you back in my life....

ya feedback plz...juss a quick lil poem...leave a link an i'll return da favor

short, but sweet little poem, nice job, the flow was kinda like a song, it would make a nice one......peace

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*FluidMusic*


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ay thanks for da feedback...uppin

yeah it was good i liked it

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wat tha hell,that was tha dumbest shit i eva read....haha juss kiddin mayn nice poem start makin songs n tha audio mayn dedicate em 2 sombodi it was koo

ay thanks fa da feedback...n mane ion got a mic otha wise i would....peace 1

uppin...leave a link n i'll return da favor

i lookin forward to seeing another one

its was tight i really liked it

ay thanks fa da feedback...still uppin

great job....wouldn't kind bein the gurl! LOL but nice drop, sounds kinda like a song. Hell itz ur poem, ur shit, u wrote it, so do it ur way!

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So what chicks can rap too/
you just won't battle me cause i can beat u/

Respect List:
AKA (down, and keepin it real)
KoObOo (A true friend wouldn't be the right words)
The Disciple (mmmm Tight probbly wouldn't be the word) lol
Tony Montana (thiz my main boi for rapping)
Ciara Myst (hey if u cant beat em', join em')
phatom (he jus got skill)
LivenLegend ( thiz my friend for life)
fluidmoon (she got ova half ya'll beat)

thanks fa da feedback...uppin