listen unlike most of ya tricks i spit mah rhymez quick to the tip
i get on the mic and let spits rip you from head to toe like jay-z
i be gettin mo, mo money mo cash mo hoes the only thing
you be gettin is bullet holes commin from mah semi-automatic
spray and close range wit mah 12 gage---trying to touch mah flow
is impossible im a lyrical sage filled wit rage ready to cut loose
im goin threw my lyrical stage livin in my lyrical sanctum
readin the book in mah head page by page i dont smoke
but still by skill i always blaze-----

1st flow ever so let me know wat u think and how i could improve
also sorry if i broke any rulz or anything

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not every one does this but this is what i would say to do, seperate ure bars, example,

i like to keep my shit flowin from coast to coast
they call me numba 1 the mc wit the most

if u wanna go to war dog we can do that
prolly bring a gun or maybe a ball bat


jus a quick example, it jus makes shit easier to read and everything, good luck pimpin AND DONT LET THE HATERS GET TO U, theres mad shit talkers on here, jus do ure thing peace

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for all these niggas that say i cant rap, nigga i dont rap any way, i ROBBBBB
-crunchy blac(three 6 mafia)


i get high like the birds and the planes, i get high when bullets hit faces after words are exchanged
-styles p(the lox)

u betta tell yo man wit the gauges im nice, i'll shoot up yo white shirts till yall look like dice
-I 20

it wasnt terrible for a first try but far from good...the good news is that you have all the time you need to elevate and get good...read the tutorials they will help you a lot...and the best way to get better is to battle so go for it...

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