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Old 10-02-04, 01:13 AM   #1
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.:Ted Bundy:. Peep This.....

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Topic: one story of Ted Bundy

She was not asleep, as her roommates had thought
they approached the bed of Joni Lenz she laid distraught
a pool of blood that was seeping from her head and face.
The bed rod had disappeared without a trace
Homicide, is the only thought runnin through their mind
They slowly removed the covers only to find…
the rod had been torn away from the bed like a lever
And viciously rammed into her newly college beaver.
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Joni was moved to the hospital as she lay in the coma
Her friends now had permanent hospital aroma
Shes got brain damage that’ll be the rest of her life
But shes lucky, the rest got cut with the butcher knife
Ted Bundy, reigned on all through the seventies
And more women fell, for his precise expertise
Joni and plenty more countless fools
Fell for his tricks, they were promised more than jewels
How many you ask? Not enough he could crave
That number is a number, Bundy takes to his grave

^^^^^^ True Story
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Old 10-02-04, 01:14 AM   #2
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i spit this in seriously liek 15 minutes, so take it easy.... but give some feedback on this........
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Old 10-02-04, 04:24 AM   #3
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yo this is dope!!
Your flow is nice, you have good rhyme's in it. Your structure is good.Good use of word's. nice drop.. keep them coming.pz
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Old 10-02-04, 01:14 PM   #4
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yupp good job ILL.. this is the reason i voted u rookie of month... nice drop keep this shit coming...
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Old 10-02-04, 03:49 PM   #5
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how could she b rookie of the..wat eva, ur shit was tite i like it. good shit
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Old 10-02-04, 05:49 PM   #6
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he nominated me for rookie of the month........ uppin for feedback....
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Old 10-02-04, 11:59 PM   #7
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yo man that was so damn good dawg.,..keep writting it makes sens

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Old 10-03-04, 08:37 PM   #8
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uppin for some feedback on this shit......
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