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Old 10-02-04, 10:30 PM   #1
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From: Chapter 4
Simplicity Is Key ...

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My rhymes realease venom in a rhymthimic flow
I rip niggas lyrically, but the outcome is to sicknin to show
Come around my place next , a quick blow will leave yo face hexed
Cuz i clap stuff that'll leave you wrapped up like safe sex
Can u handle em ? i eat niggas im known as the child hannibal
... Im a beast 'cuz i bare arms like wild animals
Im a legend, and utterly the illest underground discovery
My Force keep me high ... therefore all other is under me
Im paintin a picture perfect precise precision when i slice incisions
With Murderious encisions to send niggas into death coarse collisons ...

shit just a quick key. i dont have an open mic on rapverse,so i just whipped somethin up ...

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Old 10-03-04, 01:27 AM   #2
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ya'll sleepin ...
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Old 10-03-04, 11:59 AM   #3
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helpin it unsleep.. nice shit you shud take more time to it....
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Old 10-03-04, 03:27 PM   #4
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ill post a more thought out open mic soon ... but for now ... lookin for more feedback ...
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Old 11-01-04, 10:04 AM   #5
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it was good, should take more time on it though, the last two lines was killa
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