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10-02-04, 10:30 PM | #1 | ||
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Simplicity Is Key ...
IP:
My rhymes realease venom in a rhymthimic flow
I rip niggas lyrically, but the outcome is to sicknin to show Come around my place next , a quick blow will leave yo face hexed Cuz i clap stuff that'll leave you wrapped up like safe sex Can u handle em ? i eat niggas im known as the child hannibal ... Im a beast 'cuz i bare arms like wild animals Im a legend, and utterly the illest underground discovery My Force keep me high ... therefore all other is under me Im paintin a picture perfect precise precision when i slice incisions With Murderious encisions to send niggas into death coarse collisons ... shit just a quick key. i dont have an open mic on rapverse,so i just whipped somethin up ... feedback ... Last edited by AutoMATIK™ : 10-03-04 at 09:54 AM. |
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10-03-04, 01:27 AM | #2 | ||
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IP:
ya'll sleepin ...
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10-03-04, 11:59 AM | #3 | ||
Bonecrushing Nigga
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IP:
helpin it unsleep.. nice shit you shud take more time to it....
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10-03-04, 03:27 PM | #4 | ||
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IP:
ill post a more thought out open mic soon ... but for now ... lookin for more feedback ...
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11-01-04, 10:04 AM | #5 | |
...Jea...
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IP:
it was good, should take more time on it though, the last two lines was killa
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