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Old 10-17-04, 01:13 PM   #1
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yo, too many people act evil and try to start beef/
Many cats cant breathe and others cant sleep/
They all feel threatened like they protectin heat/
and I'm bettin you walk softly so the stairs wont creep/
Like a wet suit in a suana ya'll sweatin the Pre/
But no worries I aint out for a kill/
My past been changed and my future yet to be revealed/
And present nature is gettin fulfilled/
Its real no matter what I strike as a deal/
It wont cross the rail-road track to backpack in my front yard/
Becuz they get sprayed in a drive by before they reach my boulevard/
yall prudent shootin and screamin out threats/
Why yall do that when after all you left in an ambulance reachin the vets/
Forget all that I said/
Cuz, unless I starve myself and where a toga they'll still want me dead/

(like ghandi)
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Old 10-17-04, 01:14 PM   #2
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short post for me, felt liked doin an OPENMIC so peep it and be honest in ya feedback and please GIVE FEEDBACK!!!
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Old 10-17-04, 01:25 PM   #3
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it was aight
nice wordplay, rhyme scheme in places was predictable...
but on the whole it was a pretty decent drop
6.8/10

return the fave with feed on hip hop qoutables
links in the sig

keep the rhymes comin homeboy
peace
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Old 10-17-04, 02:13 PM   #4
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thnx dawg, still uppin yall!
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