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10-18-04, 06:52 AM | #1 | |
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Roll of Quarters
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=153902
Prayer seems so paradoxical Implausible to say the least Yet being unfair is logical Inexhaustible the way he sees Because to believe is to ease the mind And even though we know Faith’s an empty glass we’d rather ask Than have to go alone So we're owned by this distant mass Insistent his path’s enthroned We listen alas that religion perhaps Will happen to cast the stone Of tragedy prone existence lifted By the grace of a face we’re never shown Praised his name in hopes for a place In this supposed savior’s home But salvation alone won’t adhere it It’s appearing secure that sells An amalgamation of the Holy Spirit And our inherent fear of hell Cept hell is just a mirror image Of the resentment held Nailed through appendages And though intended this trust was sentenced to fail … For Heaven’s a roll of quarters Loose change you make the call Got a message and you wholly accept his Blessing our not at all Still sin’s not our fault We’ve just been convinced we must atone Though the messiah’s unlisted I dialed the digits But religion didn’t pick up the phone
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be what you speak, never speak on what you be -Sole Last edited by Adamant : 10-18-04 at 07:51 AM. |
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10-18-04, 07:03 AM | #2 | |
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IP:
weerd...was feelin this opener hot now you me an nos play wit that ill vocab....weerd an for you lil herbs that think he's a herb its adamant from rb....my good friend....
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10-18-04, 07:08 AM | #3 | |
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IP:
no doubt, thanks for replying
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10-18-04, 07:11 AM | #4 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP:
absolute.....i'd tell you to get in tha topical league but they shut that shit down....
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10-20-04, 01:06 AM | #5 | |
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IP:
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10-20-04, 08:57 AM | #6 | ||
Bangs like bikini attol
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IP:
This was good shit. What I took from it, was that so many human beings base their whole lives trying to get into this place called heaven, while there is no proof that it actually exists. So why do we bother trying to recieve our way in at all..
The last bit was killer.. ve just been convinced we must atone Though the messiah’s unlisted I dialed the digits But religion didn’t pick up the phone That there, basically put everything into context for me. And unfortunatly I dont have much to critacise from this.. So Ill ask you to just keep dropping good poetry like this and stay up brutha. |
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10-20-04, 11:47 PM | #7 | |
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IP:
thanks man, it's much appreciated
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10-21-04, 11:19 AM | #8 | ||
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IP:
This was great, nice flow to this and the words you used were great to get your point across, i as well, appreciated the last section of this poem, very well written and delivered, beautiful imagery, keep them coming.......1
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10-27-04, 01:48 AM | #9 | |
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IP:
thank ya
i appreciate yer reply
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11-09-04, 10:32 PM | #10 | |
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IP:
anyone else?
'for this sinks to the bottom
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12-18-04, 02:13 AM | #11 | |
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IP:
upped for you sleepy bastids
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05-01-05, 05:51 AM | #12 | |
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IP:
bump...........
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