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No Recycling
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Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-19-04 at 11:20 PM

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Lyric has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 10:51 PM.

Lil Tra has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-19-04 10:51 PM.

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Sent me a AIM, too timid to bitch slap me
Figured hell call out a neewb, just to make his pride happy
Battles over now hes sad, picking his courage up sadly!
Cuz the only vote he got here was given by puff daddy
I.J.L? Fuck yall! Bitchs aint nothing but kids
After this asswhooping hell leave the site and do what smoka did!
How can yall be hard, when you got niggas wolf crying!
"Oh my god!Help! Jesus I think Smokas dieing!"
Lyric you was my Ace, problems?we had hardley
Yea he helped me elevate....Now im banned from RB!

Just like poor little leaguers, you bringin nothin new to the game
Cuz Lil Tra's verse is bout as original, as his fuckin played name
Kid I tutored you in AIM, but you didn't listen to anything I said
Cuz in the gene pool for retarded people your still in over your head!
You say you look up to me man? Faggot get off my dick kid
Cus Lil Tra reached his peak, and then deep throated the tip!
Stupid herb your really useless, and your makin it a tough time
Just by showing your whackness, with your shitty ass rymes
For real kid get a ghostwriter, I mean no one could do worse

^that was better than your verse!

blah.......ive seen better lyric

Voted For: Lyric

this verse took it, votes here.

metas and mutlis, none of , but ya punches connected, i see lil tra is trying his luck on rv, but first time was a failure, <<<nothing to do with this vote. but here ya go:

lil tra: ya shit was aight, ya were blunt and ya lines were miniature, which is not bad, ya never have to worry bout stretched lines, ya punches hit but not as well as ya opponent

lyric: ya both were good, theres nothing bad to say bout either verse, its just lyrics punches hit harder, his personals came throught, nice try and either side, good effort, blah.

voteL: lyric

i need one. get at me.

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Voted For: Lyric

lyric destryoed this kid he has no chance ya had bad rhymes n bad timing some lines were stretched during lyrics verse i was lauging at part good shit

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Voted For: Lyric

lol aiight lyric took this easily

punches: lyric they was much stronger lil tra was stuck on that basic shit

structure: ur structure was good way betta then lil tra lil tra was lokin like a hill and it was ugly

flow: lyric had decent flow lil tra bad...got dayuim fam u wack u need to elevate

vote: lyric

return da fav
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Voted For: Lyric

More COnfusing than Florida Ballots

Lyric you was my Ace, problems?we had hardley
Yea he helped me elevate....Now im banned from RB!
^^only punch worht mentioning, a lil personal but not much. No feeling no meaning, no nothing weak as fuck and getting worse... 3/10

Just like poor little leaguers, you bringin nothin new to the game
Cuz Lil Tra's verse is bout as original, as his fuckin played name
^^Good punch. Not bad verse, needs to elevate. Mor epunches (weak but there) and some personals.
Noat bad as i said, for a rookie battle
4/10

Ya'll do need to elevate

One

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Voted For: Lyric

ok lyric ill give it to u man but i gotta couple complaints for both of yall.......... first off lyric ur name is alot more played then his......... and the "shitty ass rhymes" line was the worst and biggest filler bar i have ever seen on this site......... it almost lost u the battle.... but u came with sum decent punches and shit, and ur wording and vocab was better..... u also had imagery and shit which is good.....

Lil u had 4 lines relatin to that smoka thingt........ u shoulda juss used that "wolf cryin one" cuz that shit was pretty dope....... almost won u the battle

puff daddy line kinda lost it for u and so did the way u worded the setup to the last line........ doesnt really go together well......... and u had pretty bad vocab....... aight decent battle, but this goes to lyric

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