Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 10-24-04 at 04:57 AM

Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in.

sabotage has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 04:34 AM.

illuson has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-24-04 04:39 AM.

ok

"u" aint that "ill" "son", or so your record states
u dont key ur own verse, his techinquess copy and paste

i'll slap illusion down then kick him and flex
im like an NBA ref the way i hit you with techs(teks)

this is a cheap merking like clearance on retail
if i spit serious my lines would stick to your side like obese females

even if u was on an escalator u wouldnt be on the rise
i'll throw you out the window so you wont have to sin when you lie

i jus lit him up and killed him so u can call it a hot crime
knockin Ms.Cleo out is the only way u can drop a hot-line*

*psychic hotline lady

i challanged frown guy but this guy tried to sabotage me
then fakes comes along and trys to caution me
add ya both up and ya couldnt top me/
i didnt fuck with ya why would ya fuck with me
knowin in ya mind i could rap circles round ya waht ya nutz as me/
he dont got a profile up so people dont know ya lonley cause ya this close to beein exspose for phony we wont be down and well never be homie/
ya rhymes r outdated they choppy the was just chese gratedor ya dick like ya just masterbated/
ohh shit call the police his life just ran out on its lease
im like a pitbull of its leash trust me ya shouldnt of even tried to compete/
ill attack ya mind body n soul so next time ya act cocky
rember ya just got koed like my name was rocky/

ummm.......nice verse? uppin 4 votes...............

uppin 4 votes.........................................

Voted For: sabotage


this battle was
very strongly one sided

Sabotage killed me with that
HOT-LINE shit

I was like whoa

his verse got better as the verse got on

and it really flowed well

good job this time nigga

Illusion

no offense but I wsan't feelin it
It seemed lke you tried so I will help you over

AIM:ProVerse

the punches were played
and you ended with "me" 5 tims
in a row,you gotta mix it up

Sabo win this easy

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Voted For: sabotage

ok it was sabo:

flow: sabo
style: sabo
vocab: ill
opener: ill
closer: sabo
punches: sabo
personals: sabo
best line: sabo: "u" aint that "ill" "son", or so your record states
u dont key ur own verse, his techinquess copy and paste

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ok uppin 4 votes.........................................

Voted For: sabotage

this was one sided to me dude Str8 Hodd won dis easily

Sabotage-u had a pretty decent verse, i liked the pucnhes and the persoanls but it could have been better

overall 7/10

Illuson-this was a half assed verse could of been way way better but was ok for da most part

overall-5/10

Vote-Sabotage

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Voted For: sabotage

this is an easy win for sabotage.....he had better verse over all
he had better rhyme scheme....and better structer....
he also had way better punches...illusions verse just looks lazy....

vote=sabotage

return the favor......
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=157072

uppin 4 votes........................................

Voted For: sabotage

challanged frown guy but this guy tried to sabotage me
then fakes comes along and trys to caution me
add ya both up and ya couldnt top me/
i didnt fuck with ya why would ya fuck with me
knowin in ya mind i could rap circles round ya waht ya nutz as me/
^^^^^^^^^^^^ DA LINES WERE STRETCH AND THA PUNCHES WERENT THAT GOOD MAYNE TOO PLAYED AND WASNT HITTING IT















































he dont got a profile up so people dont know ya lonley cause ya this close to beein exspose for phony we wont be down and well never be homie/
ya rhymes r outdated they choppy the was just chese gratedor ya dick like ya just masterbated/
ohh shit call the police his life just ran out on its lease
im like a pitbull of its leash trust me ya shouldnt of even tried to compete/
ill attack ya mind body n soul so next time ya act cocky
rember ya just got koed like my name was rocky/
^^^^^^^^^^^ YA VERSE WAS PLAYED AN DA PUNCHES WERENT REALLY HITTING IT AGAIN U NEED TO ELEVATE ON HARDER PUNCHES AND CREATIVE ONES TOO

IT WAS TOOOOOO BASIC














































ILLUSON-YA VERSE WAS PLAYED,DIDNT HAD NO PUNCHES STANDING OUT,,,,,,,STRETCH LINES,,,,,,,,,,AND DIDNT HAD AN GOOD FLOW




"u" aint that "ill" "son", or so your record states
u dont key ur own verse, his techinquess copy and paste
^^^^^^^^^ A GOOD PUNCH NICE OPENER





































i'll slap illusion down then kick him and flex
im like an NBA ref the way i hit you with techs(teks)
^^^^^^^^^^6 ERM I DIDNT UNDERSTAND THAT LINE




































this is a cheap merking like clearance on retail
if i spit serious my lines would stick to your side like obese females
^^^^^^^^^^^ LINES STRETCH,,,,,,,,,BUT U MADE IT AN GOOD PUNCH











































even if u was on an escalator u wouldnt be on the rise
i'll throw you out the window so you wont have to sin when you lie
^^^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT NICE PUNCH LINES WERE A LIL STRETCH BUT U STILL MADE AN PUNCH OUT OF IT WAS AN "OK" PUNCH





































i jus lit him up and killed him so u can call it a hot crime
knockin Ms.Cleo out is the only way u can drop a hot-line*
^^^^^^^^^^^ AIGHT THATS AN GOOD CLOSA NICE PUNCH



















































SABOTAGE-GOOD FLOW,,,,,,,,LINES A LIL STRETCH IT RUIN DA FLOW A LIL,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,DA PUNCHES WERE HITTING IT AND CONNECTED,,,,,,,,,,,,,













































OVERALL=I HAVE TO GO WITH SABOTAGE HE HAD HARDER PUNCHES DA FLOW WAS A LIL MESSED UP BUT EITHER WAY HE HAD GOOD PUNCHES











































ILLUSON-YA VERSE WAS TOO BASIC,NEEDS VOCAB,,,,AND IT NEEDS CREATIVE PUNCHES AND PLUS SOME HARDER ONES TOO BUT KEEP IT UP ELEVATE HOMIE

~1
~PEACE~

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