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Old 10-24-04, 05:01 PM   #1
Golden shellz
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Freestyle- This is fire trust a lotta ppl said it was hot

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look im tired of these cats swearin that they hot
they write 10 lines and swear that its gonna be a drop
dont say that u nice, word to mother dont say that
im like chemical fusions i make these cats wanna react
dont be jealous
yall really think i wont harm yall fellas
2 shots not from glocks, pop 2 barettas
u cats aint the truth most of yall are cowards
when u see me in d hood, u got any idea wat ill do to u cowards?
i got glocks, that spit shots
from blocks, to hardtops
if u claim u gangsta, u talkin bout stuff u aint got
some people talkin up a storm, stuntin with a bottleg uzi
cuz i take cats underground, like they was buying a bootleg movie
i could spit half a track and let the other half sit
its like tales of the CRYPT, the way i fill so many caskets
no mercy for these rappers, cuz i have no remorse
cuz i be invading crews, like i was the trojan horse
i pausefor a second. then i slide on back
i could make this one of my tracks, nah chill ima fall back
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Old 10-24-04, 05:44 PM   #2
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aight aight i good flow nice words going............da words could of been betta.......da words was basic......needs vocab............but good shit here i give dis an 7/10 cause u didnt had no vocab pluz it wasnt an good struture but anyway good shit good flow


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i'll preciate tha feedback..............word
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Old 10-24-04, 05:46 PM   #3
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I Like That Rii Durr Its all True To a I Feel Dat Mayne 4real And If Ya Wanted feed Back Id Give Ya a 9/10 Stay Up
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Old 10-24-04, 08:16 PM   #4
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thanx for da feedback iight upin for feedback
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